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Dark, Cold World.

===== A little rhyme inspired by DaryIsue LockHart's rhymes ===== It is for the lost.. that I wanna find the way, Out from this dark place, of pain and misery. Back to ourselves.. how we were, when we were young, Before evil played its hand, before the time we got stung. I wanna be free.. but that'll have to wait! I'm trapped by emotion, by feelings soo great. And I'm not alone.. in this victims prison, D.I.Y Labotomy, I'll make the first incision. I don't want drugs, to ease my pain, I found Nirvana.. but can't get back again! Some say I'm insane! This train of thought I'm on, Goes through a portal to another dimension. But it's a dark, cold world.. where I know no fear, My heart it stops, my mind sharpens.. becomes clear, When I look into your eyes.. I can see your soul, I can reach into your heart.. but I might lose control! Sometimes I can see.. just a little too much, And round-about that time, I start to lose touch, See.. I know why you hurt, but I could hurt them too! I'd make them scream, long, sweet, songs of sorry.. just for you. However.. I know something, that they don't know, I've had a little glimpse, of the place, that they go, Where they like to turn the tables.. and play little games, Where sticks and stones hurt, but so will the names! Till then.. keep strong! Keep your mind awake, You've walked through fire, I think you should take a break, But you've seen the enemy, like me.. you wanna fight, Thats why I walk alone, with no shadow, in the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 2:31:00 PM
this is really good. and if i offended you in anyway..im sorry. it was a nightmare i had one night, and the only to stop thinking about it was to write a poem.
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Date: 11/3/2010 3:22:00 PM
This was a beautiful poem, much enjoyed it. well written, welcome to the soup :) --Madison Thomer
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Date: 11/3/2010 3:22:00 PM
This was a beautiful poem, much enjoyed it. well written, welcome to the soup :) --Madison Thomer
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:24:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Craig!! Hope you have fearless inspiration for your poetry and writing. LOve it!
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