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Dark Cloud

The cloud is darken her mind is harden as the sun took it's dinner with a heavy heart while on a black hat the cloud get thicker the evil onces is dancing to d sound of a strange music to victimize the innocent squatting became her next option to her it was pre fed to sitting there was a light voice like a thunder blast followed with a bright lighten frighten and ticking away her heart like a time bomb it was just a night mire

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Date: 5/4/2011 5:24:00 AM
Some interesting ideas, with strong imagery.
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:54:00 AM
The poetry here at the Soup today is so diverse. It was a pleasure to read yours Anthony. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to continue writing always. Love, Carol
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