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Dark Cloud

The cloud is darken
her mind is harden
as the sun took it's dinner
with a heavy heart
while on a black hat
the cloud get thicker
the evil onces is dancing 
to d sound of a strange music
to victimize the innocent
squatting became her next 
option
to her it was pre fed to sitting
there was a light voice
like a thunder blast
followed with a bright lighten
frighten and ticking away her 
heart
like a time bomb
it was just a night mire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2011 5:24:00 AM
Some interesting ideas, with strong imagery.
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:54:00 AM
The poetry here at the Soup today is so diverse. It was a pleasure to read yours Anthony. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to continue writing always. Love, Carol
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