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Dark Beauty

On a winter lake black swan dance requiem fulfilled. *lune* 5/3/5 syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/11/2013 4:35:00 PM
into the deep................. i like this deep and dark unknown passage......... Shirley, you are good at haiku......................*Skat
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Date: 6/10/2013 3:05:00 AM
Like this. Rick
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Shirley Candy
Date: 6/10/2013 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Rick :)
Date: 6/10/2013 2:24:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Shirley Candy
Date: 6/10/2013 9:46:00 AM
Thanks Kate :)
Date: 6/10/2013 12:20:00 AM
Two words I have for you my dear...''Excellent stuff!''
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Date: 6/10/2013 11:11:00 AM
Nice comment as always... Thanks M.. *hug*
Date: 6/9/2013 10:18:00 PM
Stunning atmosphere. This was utterly brilliant. I'd love to see this as a painting. Great work!
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Shirley Candy
Date: 6/10/2013 11:17:00 AM
"A game about exploring the unknown" (have read the review). Interesting v game. I should give it a try when I have the time to play. :)) thank you for the info Drake ^__^
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Drake Eszes
Date: 6/10/2013 10:17:00 AM
There's a video game called "The Unfinished Swan", actually. Have a look at it and it may be up your alley. It's a stunning looking game, considering it's all silhouettes.
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Drake. I'd love to see it as a painting too. Wish I could paint it myself but I cant :D