Dark As a Raven

sad call of raven…
supports led to the cave in
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 10:58 PM
like an omen type poem, Robb! Sad one if many lives were lost!
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 1:13 PM
So much said in such few words
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Wonderful imagery Robb in this poignant piece luv.. happy weekend..enjoyed...
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Enjoyed reading your Senryu..If this is about a real life event, I don't think that I heard about it..Thanks for stopping by and commenting..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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