Dark and Night

I got lost in the middle of your riddle
miles away I sat and pondered
while you struggled and tried to fight
against a heart on the line

I took one chance and spilled my guts
just in case you didn't know
it echoed against a solid wall
crashing unheard to the wood floor

don't feel bad, it's not your fault
I could see how it all shakes down
the differences as plain as dark and night
you always saw what I couldn't hide
it all frays, that once thick tether
even duct tape couldn't hold it together

time moves on and I think its settled
then some thought will bring it back
it could be a dream or monsoon rain
the phases of the moon or a song's refrain
it churns and surfaces once again
that old heartache--my long lost friend

don't feel bad, it's not your fault
I could see how it all shakes down
the differences as plain as dark and night
you always saw what I couldn't hide
it all frays, that once thick tether
even duct tape couldn't hold it together
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 12:01 PM
very well written...you have alot of talent! I am just a country girl so no one listens to my opinion...but great work.
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