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Dark and Mystical

The sun-deserted earth, darkness night bears A small way in the trees, easy to walk in there Where there's a cemetery not so old in years Where spiders crawl and serpents slither The sands of time have seen it wither. Dark storm strikes down the grass with rain Two lovers, young and lush, pranced unchained Pulled by the desire and the passion not drained Lost in each other’s eyes, chaos in skies insane Come to the Gothic Gate for shelter under a crane. Heard voices of starving souls needing their fills The lovers make a devilish wish with thrills until The gate opens wide to enter at their free wills With joyous cries of making love, their shadows spill Fornicating in graveyard, ravenous souls on kill. Lying on the ground, feeling the weather’s chill The rain stops, they see star-stitched sky refilled Waning moon above, their passions sing and spill Can’t see the ravenous world around waiting to kill Hands came up from the ground, the lovers killed.
+++ April 9, 2014 Form: Quintain - Monorhyme The words Darkness, Moon, Shadow, Star, World are used Third Place win Contest: Dark and Mystical by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 5/7/2014 12:59:00 AM
Wow, chills with this entertaining write Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win. These Quintains are not easy to write!
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Date: 4/13/2014 8:39:00 AM
This is a spooky one, I like where you took this theme Dr. Ram, most creative. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/13/2014 6:23:00 AM
Dr Ram I always love to read ur poems ! All r unique n amazing !! Congrats on win as ever !!
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Date: 4/13/2014 3:32:00 AM
Dr. Ram- you have a pervert in you, I am amazed! Kidding. This one is excellent and I really enjoyed where you took it, almost could be a short story, Great job!
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Date: 4/12/2014 11:01:00 PM
Dr, wonderful win..., love ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/12/2014 7:09:00 PM
Dr Ram, , Congratulations, on your awesome win.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2014 2:45:00 PM
very romantic Dr Ram with a harsh twist interesting congrats on placing and ty for taking part hugs
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/13/2014 1:16:00 AM
Thanks, Shadow, for the appreciation
Date: 4/9/2014 5:54:00 PM
oh my they got killed in the end. A dark and tragic one, Dr. Ram. I am seeing some very interesting dark entries in this contest!!
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:56:00 AM
Tragic story sir...... Awesome write as always:) Good luck the contest..:)--olive_eloi
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