Dark Ages

If in one thousand years they'll ask me What made this one so different I'll say lust for purity And control lingered on Only this time God Was shaped like an 'S' with two Lines through It

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/5/2017 9:27:00 AM

Excellent nonet poem, Yoni. This brilliant, thought provoking poem just made me add you to my Poet's List. Great message, very powerful indeed. Happy New Year. May love light the path to peace for you always.

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/18/2009 7:04:00 PM

my God, this is marvelous! love the line "lust for purity". this is just great

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2009 6:10:00 PM

Check your mail, Yoni!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/26/2009 3:48:00 PM

Wow! That got to the point succinctly. Today's God clearly identified. Nice job!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/26/2009 6:29:00 AM

Well sustained grammatically and thematically... a perfect NONET with a compelling message! Best wishes, Keith

Arany P.

Date: 3/26/2009 3:04:00 AM

this is excellent! i loved the truth... ~ Arany

John Rhinem

Date: 3/25/2009 10:38:00 PM

....for it seems rarely that such as yourself are truly found within this pace? And thus I tip my hat unto you; for being whom you you seem to be!? A wonderful soul, wrapped inside of caring heart filled with talent! Kudos to you my friend! And, don"t ever stop being you! Love and warmth to all you love, John!:)

John Rhinem

Date: 3/25/2009 10:16:00 PM

Hello Yoni~Ijustwanted to stop by to sincerely tell tell your self, that I have noticed your writings and comments over the past couple of months; and I have been extremely inpressed with what I have seen within it all....You seem like a loved feeled soul, with a very sincere person heart, with the abilty to extend yourself with a compassioance~always searhing for the interpreatations and true depths of others fellings and words! Very very admirable and wonderful my friend!....cont

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/25/2009 8:10:00 PM

Dear Yoni, I just read YOUR Comment on my POEM " Broken Heart" I am optimistic and I will not have a Broken Heart Forever I will be with LENORE FOREVER 38 Years is but a minuscule of time in GOD'S Creation Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment ALWAYS... HG

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/25/2009 7:57:00 PM

the bare truth. I like it! nicely done... Lucinda

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/25/2009 6:56:00 PM

Dear Yoni, Great Nonet ; the middle prong of Satan's Trident stands for greed It is a shame that some People crave money over GOD very GOOD Write ALWAYS...HG

Jerry Whalley

Date: 3/25/2009 3:16:00 PM

All men make a God of their desire -- Virgil

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2009 2:36:00 PM

Very well stated, Yoni! Worshiping the almighty dollar, instead of God. Very astute observation

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2009 1:21:00 PM

Wow...this has a lot to ponder....too much truth been said here.