Dark Ages

If in one thousand years they'll ask me
What made this one so different 
I'll say lust for purity  
And control lingered on
Only this time God
Was shaped like an 
'S' with two
Lines through
It

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 5, 2017 at 9:27 AM

Excellent nonet poem, Yoni. This brilliant, thought provoking poem just made me add you to my Poet's List. Great message, very powerful indeed. Happy New Year. May love light the path to peace for you always.

Brian Anderson

April 18, 2009 at 7:04 PM

my God, this is marvelous! love the line "lust for purity". this is just great

Carolyn Devonshire

March 26, 2009 at 6:10 PM

Check your mail, Yoni!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 26, 2009 at 3:48 PM

Wow! That got to the point succinctly. Today's God clearly identified. Nice job!

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 26, 2009 at 6:29 AM

Well sustained grammatically and thematically... a perfect NONET with a compelling message! Best wishes, Keith

Arany P.

March 26, 2009 at 3:04 AM

this is excellent! i loved the truth... ~ Arany

John Rhinem

March 25, 2009 at 10:38 PM

....for it seems rarely that such as yourself are truly found within this pace? And thus I tip my hat unto you; for being whom you you seem to be!? A wonderful soul, wrapped inside of caring heart filled with talent! Kudos to you my friend! And, don"t ever stop being you! Love and warmth to all you love, John!:)

John Rhinem

March 25, 2009 at 10:16 PM

Hello Yoni~Ijustwanted to stop by to sincerely tell tell your self, that I have noticed your writings and comments over the past couple of months; and I have been extremely inpressed with what I have seen within it all....You seem like a loved feeled soul, with a very sincere person heart, with the abilty to extend yourself with a compassioance~always searhing for the interpreatations and true depths of others fellings and words! Very very admirable and wonderful my friend!....cont

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 25, 2009 at 8:10 PM

Dear Yoni, I just read YOUR Comment on my POEM " Broken Heart" I am optimistic and I will not have a Broken Heart Forever I will be with LENORE FOREVER 38 Years is but a minuscule of time in GOD'S Creation Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment ALWAYS... HG

Lucinda Bulger

March 25, 2009 at 7:57 PM

the bare truth. I like it! nicely done... Lucinda

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 25, 2009 at 6:56 PM

Dear Yoni, Great Nonet ; the middle prong of Satan's Trident stands for greed It is a shame that some People crave money over GOD very GOOD Write ALWAYS...HG