Dark

creamy chocolates my favorite zip up coat coffee but with cream

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Evelyn Evelyn

Date: 10/16/2023 6:59:00 AM

this feels so cozy, i like it !!

Karen Croft
Date: 10/16/2023 11:53:00 AM

Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2023 4:04:00 AM

- Black coffee for me...no chocolate ... lovely written, Karen :) - hugs

Karen Croft
Date: 10/16/2023 4:54:00 AM

Thank you

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/16/2023 3:22:00 AM

creamy dark to lick .....

Karen Croft
Date: 10/16/2023 4:55:00 AM

Inspiration?

Ink Empress

Date: 10/15/2023 10:31:00 PM

I love creamy chocoltes, ah this got me craving! Lovely haiku! Well written. You must be a coffee lover. Delicious haiku this is

Karen Croft
Date: 10/15/2023 11:10:00 PM

Yes I am a die hard coffee drinker! Thanks for stopping by

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/15/2023 10:07:00 PM

Ohhh, dark chocolates, coffee.. Ahh, I love these! A beautifully delicious haiku.. The alliteration is also very smoothly flowing, wonderfully crafted!!

Karen Croft
Date: 10/15/2023 11:10:00 PM

Thank you very much. I love both chocolate and coffee!