Dark

creamy chocolates 
my favorite zip up coat 
coffee but with cream
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Evelyn Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 6:59 AM
this feels so cozy, i like it !!
Croft Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:04 AM
- Black coffee for me...no chocolate ... lovely written, Karen :) - hugs
Croft Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Thank you
Bangalee Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:22 AM
creamy dark to lick .....
Croft Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Inspiration?
Empress Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 10:31 PM
I love creamy chocoltes, ah this got me craving! Lovely haiku! Well written. You must be a coffee lover. Delicious haiku this is
Croft Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Yes I am a die hard coffee drinker! Thanks for stopping by
Sharma  Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 10:07 PM
Ohhh, dark chocolates, coffee.. Ahh, I love these! A beautifully delicious haiku.. The alliteration is also very smoothly flowing, wonderfully crafted!!
Croft Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Thank you very much. I love both chocolate and coffee!
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