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We woke in darkness, not because The dawn had not arrived But rather due to power, of which We had been deprived. An underground transformer, We were told, at our hotel, Went on the fritz and when it Could be fixed, they couldn’t tell. Our flight was in the morning, so We packed and dressed to leave, A challenge in a pitch-black room, Which you could well believe. We skipped the shower and no make-up I could thus apply, And so I looked as bad As I could look if I did try. Although, within the scheme of things That can go wrong each day, This glitch, while quite annoying’s Hardly reason to inveigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/28/2018 3:06:00 PM
I had a similar experience some weeks ago when a storm knocked out the power. Going to the bathroom, I pretended to be blind. I almost killed myself trying to locate the bedroom door! I figured the power would come on while I was asleep, so I didn't bother lighting a candle, since I couldn't locate the flashlight, which, as it turned out, had dead batteries. Not my night. / M
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Date: 9/27/2018 12:07:00 PM
I can picture this as if I were there but I can't see anything because it is too dark. : ) Nicely done Ilene
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Date: 9/27/2018 11:17:00 AM
Enjoyed this read, although I was glad that I could enjoy it vicariously,...and thanks for teaching me what "inveigh" means. (I honestly didn't know). Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 9/26/2018 10:36:00 PM
Yikes, hope you didn't leave anything behind Ilene. Tom
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