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Daring Daffodils

Daring Daffodils

wearing nothing but
yellow crowns and green stockings...
daring daffodils

beautifulflowerdaffodilshaiku

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Luke Hobbs

August 19, 2018 at 5:41 PM

I do love an ending with alliteration. Well done.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 19, 2018 at 5:48 PM

Thank you dear Luke for your kind complimentary words and support! I hope you had an enjoyable weekend! Best regards. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

May 12, 2018 at 10:20 PM

Very cute :)

Pandita Sietesantos

May 13, 2018 at 8:44 AM

Hi Kim, thank you so much for the visit - this piece is one of my favorites! :-)Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

February 10, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Delightfully whimsical. Love it, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

February 10, 2018 at 10:39 AM

Hehehe - that's exactly what I thought about those daring daffodils! Thank you so much! Pandita

Paul Callus

May 27, 2015 at 7:47 AM

Lovely haiku, Pandita. Indeed they are daring, but luckily for us, we can enjoy their beauty. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

May 27, 2015 at 9:45 AM

It is wonderful to hear from you dear Paul! Thank you so very much for the extra lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

May 25, 2015 at 1:43 AM

Pandita, I love this very clever haiku! Well done, my friend! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

May 25, 2015 at 1:46 AM

Oh thank you so very much, dear Kika for your sweet compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Skat A

May 21, 2015 at 7:31 PM

the perfect haiku. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

May 22, 2015 at 12:15 PM

SKAT A, I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliment! I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Have a lovely weekend! Pandita

Emile Pinet

May 19, 2015 at 1:27 PM

Your words graced the page with a flow of poetic creativity and finesse. Emile. #7

Pandita Sietesantos

May 20, 2015 at 1:57 PM

Hi Emile, thank you for stopping by, reading my work, and leaving me such beautiful compliments and rating! Warmest regards to you, my friend! Pandita