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Daring Daffodils

Daring Daffodils

wearing nothing but
yellow crowns and green stockings...
daring daffodils

beautifulflowerdaffodilshaiku

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Luke Hobbs

Date: 8/19/2018 5:41:00 PM

I do love an ending with alliteration. Well done.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/19/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thank you dear Luke for your kind complimentary words and support! I hope you had an enjoyable weekend! Best regards. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2018 10:20:00 PM

Very cute :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

Hi Kim, thank you so much for the visit - this piece is one of my favorites! :-)Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2018 9:21:00 AM

Delightfully whimsical. Love it, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/10/2018 10:39:00 AM

Hehehe - that's exactly what I thought about those daring daffodils! Thank you so much! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2015 7:47:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Pandita. Indeed they are daring, but luckily for us, we can enjoy their beauty. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/27/2015 9:45:00 AM

It is wonderful to hear from you dear Paul! Thank you so very much for the extra lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 5/25/2015 1:43:00 AM

Pandita, I love this very clever haiku! Well done, my friend! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/25/2015 1:46:00 AM

Oh thank you so very much, dear Kika for your sweet compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2015 7:31:00 PM

the perfect haiku. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/22/2015 12:15:00 PM

SKAT A, I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliment! I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Have a lovely weekend! Pandita

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/19/2015 1:27:00 PM

Your words graced the page with a flow of poetic creativity and finesse. Emile. #7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/20/2015 1:57:00 PM

Hi Emile, thank you for stopping by, reading my work, and leaving me such beautiful compliments and rating! Warmest regards to you, my friend! Pandita