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Dare to Wonder

Dance to the rhythm of my heart Can you feel the vibration? Can you feel it from head to toe? I listen…to your melody – a gift to unwrap It’s a healing potion to this lonely man without a roof on his head How can You craft such marvelous miracles? *chorus* Dare to wonder What I’ve become…so numb Dare to wonder What I dream…not like some Break free from wretched reality Dare to wonder How it feels to be…free! Freedom has a high cost – it’s not free Pay the price Roll the dice My prize to you is my love You made me merrily sing from the start… Can you hear me longing for you? Can you elevate me above the disconsolate clouds? I watch keenly at your performance – a dream come true It’s GOOD LUCK in disguise – it took hard work, man! How can you surprise me with your trippy talent? *double chorus - both differentish* Dare to wonder What I’ve become…so numb Dare to wonder What I dream…not like some Break free from wretched reality Dare to wonder How it feels to be…free! Freedom has a high cost – it’s not free Pay the price Roll the dice My gifts of expressing inner love Dare to wonder What I’ve become…a naughty boy who loves To cause trouble and what not Dare to wander In my eloquent dreams…wrapped up in wings of doves I deliver it to you ‘cause you’re hot! Break free from plastic reality Dare to wonder How it feels to be…truly happy! Freedom is free – for us thankfully No need to pay the price Drop those silly dice! My present to you is my peace I hand to you ~bridge~ We’ll rejoice all day long As long as we enjoy this song Dare to wonder How I put it all together? Inspiration is key – it’s like catching a light feather And letting it float about in the swirling sky I release my passion and write it down on paper It’s merely a work of art – It’s original from the young heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/24/2014 8:34:00 AM
22nd on the list: David, if you could please make a video for us to be able to hear how your song goes. I'm sure it will flow very well when sung as it is being read.
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Date: 5/28/2014 2:21:00 PM
Hey! Thank yah lots. Umm... my friend, Cheyenne is gonna sing it actually. I'll send you the link as soon as possible and possibly, I'll do my version in the future during the summer at the latest. x) I promeese !
Date: 4/28/2014 9:20:00 AM
Ok, so, I have a YouTube channel, where I do covers of songs, or do some of my own. I would like to know I could sing this (giving you credit of course). I would really appreciate it, because your words are so beautiful, and I feel like it would be amazing as a song.
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:35:00 PM
"What I’ve become…a naughty boy who loves To cause trouble and what not" Instead of naughty boy, sing: Naughty girl - ok! Thanks for bearing with me!
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:31:00 PM
I have a YouTube channel too! Add me on YouTube and I'll subscribe to you. What's your name on YouTube?? Send it to me on p-soup mail please! :)
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:31:00 PM
Sure! Go for it! It would be wonderful how you come up with it...you can change some words up for perfect rhythm. if you'd like (edit it some). Thank you! I'm obliged by this offer and comment. It was meant to be some sort of song, so make it any tune or any genre you want - your choice!! :) Have an awesome week!
Date: 4/25/2014 8:01:00 AM
I'm amazed I am the first to comment. The feather reference made me think of the feather floating about at the beginning of Forrest Gump. I do believe imagination is the key to breaking free. There are songs yet to be sung and like the feather we can float effortlessly on the breath of God's possibilities.
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:34:00 PM
Yeah! Thanks for being the first to comment. That's brilliant! I appreciate reading your kind comments, good sir! I know right? Haha! I didn't notice it at first, but now that you mention it, oh yeah! That's correct! So true what you said here. Have a great week and write with your might! -DWB