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Dare to Dream

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What would you do if you knew you can't fail? How vastly each ocean of life would you sail? So many places and things to be seen limited only by daring to dream. What reasons could be of the things we conceive that they're not the very same things we achieve? Know that you can, though some say you shouldn't. No fear that you'd fail till you thought that you couldn't! Funny the choices in life that we make. We err on the side that is cautious and safe. All the while dreaming where we'd rather be, searching for something that makes us feel free. How many chances have passed when you could've, only to find yourself wishing you would've? The delusion of youth is that time's on your side but nobody knows just how long we ride. - Jeannie Minor

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Date: 3/5/2016 5:44:00 PM
This piece really shows your genius for writing. I love this poem. Peace my dear and A7
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 3/6/2016 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. You are way too kind!
Date: 12/14/2015 8:56:00 AM
Great piece Jeannie! Your hallmark couplet rhyming and flow makes this a pleasure to read and review. Your second verse reminds me so much of my piece 'The Cape.' BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 9:14:00 AM
Bless you Jeannie! K.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 12/14/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Keith, I'll be checking that out! Always looking to share with the likeminded.
Date: 11/26/2015 7:30:00 AM
Jeannie, I just love the last stanza so much! sweet tempo but you powerfully conveyed your message! God bless!=`) ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 11/26/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thank you. Blessings to you and your family.
Date: 11/26/2015 3:52:00 AM
WOW! Thank you!
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/2/2016 3:19:00 PM
Would you indulge me the courtesy of an email? I have a question I would prefer to be answered by you.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 11/26/2015 9:33:00 AM
You are most welcome. My hope is to inspire one soul out there to go for it!