Danny

Danny How proud am I to say your mine you’ve grown up strong and true From little boy with deep blue eyes To lad with hair like … glue You are my little hoodie I would not change a thing Your bright and kind and loving You are my everything With all that you achieve Shows who you really are All the steps you take my love Will challenge you by far

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Julie Heckman

Date: 1/8/2011 9:02:00 PM

Like the humor in this poem. I have also written a poem on my brother Danny it's called "Elegy". Check it out and tell me what you think... julie

James Tate

Date: 1/6/2011 10:49:00 AM

Jackie, I like this description of a growing child. The hair like glue is funny and witty. On the line below did you mean "you're"? Your bright and kind and loving I've added a couple of new ones to mine. Drop over and comment if you wish.

Martyn Oakland

Date: 1/4/2011 9:28:00 AM

i like that, witty and funny. im guessing its about a son of yours?