Jackie Green Poet Rhyme

Danny

Danny

How proud am I to say your mine
you’ve grown up strong and true
From little boy with deep blue eyes
To lad with hair like … glue

You are my little hoodie
I would not change a thing
Your bright and kind and loving
You are my everything

With all that you achieve 
Shows who you really are
All the steps you take my love
Will challenge you by far

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Julie Heckman January 8, 2011 at 9:02 PM Like the humor in this poem. I have also written a poem on my brother Danny it's called "Elegy". Check it out and tell me what you think... julie

James Tate January 6, 2011 at 10:49 AM Jackie, I like this description of a growing child. The hair like glue is funny and witty. On the line below did you mean "you're"? Your bright and kind and loving I've added a couple of new ones to mine. Drop over and comment if you wish.

Martyn Oakland January 4, 2011 at 9:28 AM i like that, witty and funny. im guessing its about a son of yours?