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Dangerous Love

You wanted someone strong; you wanted someone who wouldn’t crack. You thought you were making me tough by breaking me down. You told yourself it was the only way, because I wasn’t the boy you wanted. 
No
I was a girl, your first born. I was delicate, young, and very impressionable. I grew numb to the pain I became accustom to. 
You succeeded. You made me into someone the world couldn’t shatter, because you can’t break something that’s already in pieces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/4/2017 8:13:00 PM
Tiani, it sounds to me that you had a rough childhood growing up. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Nice to meet you.
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Tiani Rodriguez
Date: 9/15/2017 1:39:00 AM
thank you for the warm welcoming!
Date: 5/17/2017 12:23:00 PM
This is an empowering write Tiani. I love it. Amitiés and welcome to the Soup:)
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Tiani Rodriguez
Date: 5/17/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much i hope to only become better! Thank you for welcoming me to Soup! :)
Date: 5/17/2017 12:02:00 PM
Tiani, you can write! This is beautiful. But painful and sad the same time. Don't ever stop writing, welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Tiani Rodriguez
Date: 5/17/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, your response means more to me than you could possibly imagine. By the way, your poetry is beautiful as well and so full of emotion. I love it :)