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Danger Passion

Excites me strongly a strange housewife Passion for her deprives of peace my life She is inaccessible because of my poverty If I live further - I'll get a precious property

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/14/2018 11:01:00 AM

It s a nicely written and passionate write, this all is predestination and already written, we should try our best to improve our situation but always remember that this life is a test and God is testing us so the life isn t always pleasant, there shall be happy as well as sad moments and true love is when your partner stood by you and support you rather than complaining, well one quick question, are you fond of army or military, well I m not sure but I observe it,I may very well be wrong

Hai Hon
Date: 3/14/2018 12:01:00 PM

Thank you! I described the real passion, but I understand that it is necessary to fight correctly with all passions that distort human nature.Love between a man and a woman should be free from passionate feelings and marriage is a means of educating virtues. I love the army, but not everyone.Now I value Kurdish Peshmerga above all armies.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/27/2018 12:21:00 PM

So beautiful and passionate, Hai Hon

Hai Hon
Date: 2/27/2018 1:13:00 PM

Thank you! Due to lack of money, love can bring no less sufferings than in the story of Romeo and Juliet.)

Silent One

Date: 2/15/2018 6:55:00 AM

Very passionate and sensual write Hai..

Hai Hon
Date: 2/15/2018 6:59:00 AM

Thank you for your penetrating comment!