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Danger Lurked

Danger lurked in each alleyway pungent smells could not overcome it fear gathered hanging darkly Terror striking minds all edgy creeping fear filling the dark pit danger lurked in each alleyway Draughty eerie winds blow fiercely ahead a faint glow, a light lit fear gathered hanging darkly The screams I can hear not earthy what on earth can be the culprit danger lurked in each alleyway An apparition all ghostly clothed in a scary outfit fear gathered hanging darkly I stood peering, the night inky the shadows moved seeming to emit danger lurked in each alleyway fear gathered hanging darkly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 6:30:00 PM
A restful haunting piece dear Shadow.I like the use of repetition.
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Date: 6/11/2013 4:27:00 PM
dearest M.M yes its an exacting form lines 1 and repeat alternately then join together at end lol glad it appealed to you

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