Danger Expose

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Cobalt blue clouds cover the sun
Magenta sun rising
Fog slips between dark green foliage
A red sunrise springing

A warning~ a storm is brewing
Danger in the storm's wake
The stillness with roosters crowing
Seems simplicity's take

Maybe not simplicity at all
Possibly dangers there
Waiting in the thick undergrowth
In a place that seems fair

Deep, deep red sun on the horizon
Just a portion now shows 
An angry red war waging
What next will danger expose  

Unfinished

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/11/2015 2:59:00 AM

Its dangerous. Always be cautious. Well written. Thanks for sharing.

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 6/10/2015 9:45:00 PM

Dear Sara, Thank you so much for the honor of choosing my poem for 1st place in your cinquain contest. I have never won anything for my writing. You made a happy girl out of me. I would have e-mailed you but haven't learned how to do that yet. I could use some advice.

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 6/9/2015 11:07:00 PM

All my grey hairs are showing. I looked at the deadline for the contest and I read June instead of July. Glad I didn't miss it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/10/2015 10:16:00 AM

Charlene, Senior moments exist in my world as well and they get more frequent but with God on my side I will survive.. Sara

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 6/9/2015 11:00:00 PM

WOW Sara, what a well written, poem full of imagery. I could "feel" the coming danger. Sorry I missed the deadline for your Cinquain poem contest. I didn't realize when I submitted it, there was a deadline of June 4th.