Danger

Danger the sign reads,but i hit the petal and exceed.Not knowing there is a cliff ahead,where 
i may lay close to dead.And then with all the courage it takes to fight,i got up and lived 
through another night.Hate is such a strong word.Vile...not my style.But somewhere in my 
cerebellum i hear me tell em i have crossed that thin line and im tired of trying!Im letting 
go.Hoped he would come running but he just stood,so then i knew i should...leave.hoped in 
my car accompanied by loneliness in the passenger seat.Felt the need to hit the accelerator 
as pain settled in my feet.ANGER!ANGER!pressed it hard until the sign read DANGER!and i 
fell,now somewhere lost between heaven and hell.just lost.
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Palli Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Can feel the danger
Loveless Avatar
June 10, 2009 at 9:18 AM
You Speak With A Lot Of Emotion. I Already Love Your Poems. Peace. Boo
Rhinem Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 1:41 AM
Ahh, the many lesson filled moments of our lifes....Smile, but You can 'never' give up dear; for before You know it, You may find Yourself upon the road of joy and happiness again....Excellently expressed and written write; showing many wonderful signs of a potentially great writer I believe~For the soul is "The Jewel" of all blessed hearts Rebecca!!!:):)~"Warmth & Love Always To You & Yours, John!!!" Bye ~
Shango Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 9:58 PM
But then by grace you are found again ... praises for the second round ... you write so well ... may the soup bring you honor and consolement, welcome here.
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