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Dandefluff

In a field of time, remote,
I'm destined to forever float.
Once, I was sure-footed,
youthful and firmly rooted 
until a little girl went "puff",
and now I'm only dandefluff.

As time marched on, aloof,  
a little girl went "poof".  
Skies, like hair, turned to grey,
and a dandelion had her day, 
but, in memory, I ring true,
in a sunlit sky of blue.

Will my scattered seed,
fulfill the childish need 
of tomorrow's winsome girl
setting a new stem atwirl?
A gentle breeze that blows, 
comforts me and says it's so. 

or will I forever float, 
airborne, like a wandering boat, 
lost in time or sky or sea
of her ancient memory?
Will she hear her first dog  
bark like a horn through fog? 

I don't know, I'm just some stuff, 
a little floating dandefluff. 
Only angels can ever tell. 
Find them by the wishing well
is my advice.  Farewell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Canerdy Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 6:16 AM
David, I absolutely LOVE this poem. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Crandall Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:19 AM
Thanks, Janice - that makes me glad I decided to enter this one!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 5:11 PM
enjoyed the rhymes and the dandleflff. engaging words.
Crandall Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 12:05 PM
Almost seems like this is your dandefluff week. Did you add to a poem you wrote earlier? You seem also to be focused on themes like nostalgia and aging. It is a theme constantly creeping into my own poetry!
Crandall Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Yep, it's dandefluff week! I just keep adding a verse in each successive "dandefluff". So, I guess I can delete dandefluff1, dandefluff2, dandefluff3.
Crandall Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:50 PM
Yep, it's dandefluff week! I just keep adding a verse in each successive "dandefluff". So, I guess I can delete dandefluff1, dandefluff2, dandefluff3.
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