Dancing Words - a Waltz Wave

Words
dancing
in
my head,
words that rhyme,
that tell
a 
tale; words
and thoughts that
jive and wail, just
waiting to
be set
to
ink. If
I can but
capture
those
dancing
words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 24, 2023 at 4:33 PM
Thoughts are a wild symphony, yearning to be arranged into a harmonious composition on paper. It's exhilarating. You have done exceptionally well. Kim.
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July 7, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Thank you, Sotto!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 1:19 PM
this is really cool. Glad I am finally seeing it.
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June 23, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Ball Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Words dancing through my head waiting to be put in order on the page. Love it. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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June 11, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Judy! Hope you are feeling better!
Slaughter Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:06 AM
In three-quarter time...A lovely and lively piece, Kim.
Merryman Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Jim!
Kaufman Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Hi Kim, They were dancing across the page in this one. Loved the imagery.
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June 11, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, Nancy!
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June 11, 2023 at 1:55 AM
I do believe you've achieved your Goal Kim.
Merryman Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, John!
Bauer Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 12:23 PM
i think you've captured them quite well, kim! i enjoyed...
Merryman Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, Ilene!
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