Dancing With Flowers

As I danced with flowers on that morn fair
And stepped on green moss, floating on air
You watched from under the pine green
Fire in your eyes, the air serene

Face flushed, arms extended wide
In and out with blooms on both side
Flirtiest breeze caressing the untamed hair
Enchanting aroma of wildflowers on the air

I paused as you came near
Shining eyes a hint of fear
A yellow bloom you stuck to my breast
The tingle in my toes reached my chest

Whimsical, wonderful our dance entwined
Rhythm unseen, hands tightly twined
Shimmering flowers with dew or sweat
As raindrops fall, we are wet

1/07/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Goff Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:08 AM
amazing write!
Inka Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Amazing poem, Descriptive verse, and flowing rhyme"My favorite type to read. Allowed me to visualize and feel those moments. thank you for sharing
May Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 7:36 AM
congrats on a fine win Tahera
Liwayway Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:37 AM
wow!! this is a very beautiful poem of yours friend Tahera.. I like it..Congratulations on your win!! Cheers!! Maria
Sathasivam Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 11:27 PM
Excellent. Lovely imagery poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
Mohammed Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 11:02 PM
Beautiful imagery.Congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 5:59 PM
A delightful write, Tahera! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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July 17, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA
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July 17, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Tahera, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
Ellison Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Beautiful images... a beautifully written poem my dear Tahera! Kudos... hugs, Jack xox
Ryerson Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 3:54 AM
Oh yes Tahera...I remember this gem but did not realize it was for a contest...I can easily see why it was a winner...I also wanted to tell you that I LOVE your first name...A beautiful name for a beautiful lady, both inside and out...Congratulations my friend and thank you for your very kind comments and support - Tim
Mannan Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 10:48 PM
Thanks Tim, meant a lot.
Delaney Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 11:14 PM
A lovely dance and conjures pretty images . SuZ
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 5:33 PM
Enjoyed your poetry this evening. It flows so beautiful. Warm Smiles, Connie
Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 7:05 AM
- One of the prettiest poem I've read in a long time ...... Thanks for the beautifully post Tahera !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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July 14, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:22 PM
nice poem congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
Candy Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Congratz for being one of featured poem this week, Taheran. Nicely written poem, such a beauty scene you created here.. *hug*
Nair Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 7:46 PM
It is a captivating dance performance, well written, Tahera, how are you?
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 12:29 PM
This one has great rhythm, rhyme and flow..It has such a passionate yet relaxed tone to it that I felt my spirit become quiet..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 12:29 PM
oh my, the cadence of your images swirl in fine form, tahera.. been a while, hope you are good... a jewel this one!..:) hugggs
Ryerson Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Whew!...VERY romantic, Tahera...The poem itself is a dance...'Shining eyes, a hint of fear', captures the first encounter perfectly...Lovely! - Tim PS: He's a lucky fella too!
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:59 AM
I'm happy to see such a beautiful new poem posted by you. I am fine. how are you, Tahera?
Mohammed Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 2:23 AM
Lovely poem and flow.Enjoyed this one from you.
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