Dancing With Flowers

As I danced with flowers on that morn fair
And stepped on green moss, floating on air
You watched from under the pine green
Fire in your eyes, the air serene

Face flushed, arms extended wide
In and out with blooms on both side
Flirtiest breeze caressing the untamed hair
Enchanting aroma of wildflowers on the air

I paused as you came near
Shining eyes a hint of fear
A yellow bloom you stuck to my breast
The tingle in my toes reached my chest

Whimsical, wonderful our dance entwined
Rhythm unseen, hands tightly twined
Shimmering flowers with dew or sweat
As raindrops fall, we are wet

1/07/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/30/2015 7:08:00 AM
amazing write!
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Date: 12/9/2013 10:06:00 PM
Amazing poem, Descriptive verse, and flowing rhyme"My favorite type to read. Allowed me to visualize and feel those moments. thank you for sharing
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Date: 7/18/2013 7:36:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Tahera
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Date: 7/18/2013 1:37:00 AM
wow!! this is a very beautiful poem of yours friend Tahera.. I like it..Congratulations on your win!! Cheers!! Maria
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Date: 7/17/2013 11:27:00 PM
Excellent. Lovely imagery poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 7/17/2013 11:02:00 PM
Beautiful imagery.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:59:00 PM
A delightful write, Tahera! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:21:00 PM
Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:10:00 PM
Tahera, Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful images... a beautifully written poem my dear Tahera! Kudos... hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 7/17/2013 3:54:00 AM
Oh yes Tahera...I remember this gem but did not realize it was for a contest...I can easily see why it was a winner...I also wanted to tell you that I LOVE your first name...A beautiful name for a beautiful lady, both inside and out...Congratulations my friend and thank you for your very kind comments and support - Tim
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 7/17/2013 10:48:00 PM
Thanks Tim, meant a lot.
Date: 7/16/2013 11:14:00 PM
A lovely dance and conjures pretty images . SuZ
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Date: 7/16/2013 5:33:00 PM
Enjoyed your poetry this evening. It flows so beautiful. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 7:05:00 AM
- One of the prettiest poem I've read in a long time ...... Thanks for the beautifully post Tahera !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 7/10/2013 3:22:00 PM
nice poem congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/7/2013 9:14:00 PM
Congratz for being one of featured poem this week, Taheran. Nicely written poem, such a beauty scene you created here.. *hug*
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Date: 7/5/2013 7:46:00 PM
It is a captivating dance performance, well written, Tahera, how are you?
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Date: 7/2/2013 12:29:00 PM
oh my, the cadence of your images swirl in fine form, tahera.. been a while, hope you are good... a jewel this one!..:) hugggs
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Date: 7/2/2013 12:29:00 PM
This one has great rhythm, rhyme and flow..It has such a passionate yet relaxed tone to it that I felt my spirit become quiet..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:38:00 PM
Whew!...VERY romantic, Tahera...The poem itself is a dance...'Shining eyes, a hint of fear', captures the first encounter perfectly...Lovely! - Tim PS: He's a lucky fella too!
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:59:00 AM
I'm happy to see such a beautiful new poem posted by you. I am fine. how are you, Tahera?
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Date: 7/1/2013 2:23:00 AM
Lovely poem and flow.Enjoyed this one from you.
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