Dancing Willow

Willow dance with me 
Heavenly aviary 
But let the birds stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 9, 2010 at 9:16 PM
nice one, enjoyed..p.d.
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June 9, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Very relaxing
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June 9, 2010 at 1:55 PM
A lovely haiku, Alan. They birds say, "Thank you" and so do I. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Best wishes, Carolyn
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June 9, 2010 at 1:19 PM
You have me smiling with this view. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen
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