Dancing Water Drops

dancing water drops on a floating lotus leaf.... mother's cradling lap ==================== Placement:2nd; (September 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:haiku me some nature,please Sponsor:Constance La France
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Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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September 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.
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September 4, 2011 at 8:08 PM
hahaha, Carolyn pronounced you a queen of haku. That is too much, Kash!! I think between the two of us, we will have some people fooled for a long time to come. This was really good, as I said before. You really got haiku with this one. Congrats on your win.
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September 4, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Dear Kash, I now pronounce you the haiku queen! This is probably the best haiku I've seen in a long time. Congratulations on your win! Love you, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Kash, I see congratulations are in order.. Love this ;) lfde right back at you ;-)
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September 4, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Congrats on your win! Kim
Susan Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:21 PM
beautiful! congratulations on your win :)
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Many congrats, Kash : )
Mehta Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest,kashinath
Williams Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 5:03 AM
hey Kash love it.. many congrats..David
Onclaud Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 3:19 AM
i like, like, kash...sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:11 PM
Congrats Kash on second place win with this stunning entry my friend.. wonderful write luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 4:10 PM
yes ...perfection Kash as this vivid piece indicates winning wonder luv..good luck...so glad u enjoyed my spiritual side ..luv..
Nair Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 9:50 AM
nice images, kashi, thnx for visiting and good luck, jag
Song Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Good morn, Kash..This is subtle..image is soothing...tying in mother's cradling lap changes the ending to magnificence! Please check email for a short lil note. Thanks, best to u and your whole family this holiday weekend. Gwendolen
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September 3, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Enjoyed reading this one...Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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September 4, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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September 3, 2011 at 3:16 AM
A gorgeous word picture Kash. a delight. good work. thank you for your pick up in my poem 'my ease' A slip up there. I stuck a little 'will' in and hope it floats. :-) cheers Marg...
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September 2, 2011 at 5:52 PM
W O N D E R F U L, kashi... a real winning material... go, go and cheers for being a PM!! ) huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:26 PM
keep you pen flowing excellent
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September 2, 2011 at 12:53 PM
wow, you are really getting into the essence of haiku, kash. VERY nicely donefor the contest. I am glad I caught this just on my way out the door.I plan to see two movies in a row. Just love my Fridays. Luv, Andrea ps. I beat you with my haiku by just a fraction of time!
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