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Dancing Water Drops

dancing water drops on a floating lotus leaf.... mother's cradling lap ==================== Placement:2nd; (September 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:haiku me some nature,please Sponsor:Constance La France

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:08:00 PM

hahaha, Carolyn pronounced you a queen of haku. That is too much, Kash!! I think between the two of us, we will have some people fooled for a long time to come. This was really good, as I said before. You really got haiku with this one. Congrats on your win.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/4/2011 4:49:00 PM

Dear Kash, I now pronounce you the haiku queen! This is probably the best haiku I've seen in a long time. Congratulations on your win! Love you, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2011 2:46:00 PM

Kash, I see congratulations are in order.. Love this ;) lfde right back at you ;-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Kim

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/4/2011 2:21:00 PM

beautiful! congratulations on your win :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2011 8:58:00 AM

Many congrats, Kash : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 7:51:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,kashinath

David Williams

Date: 9/4/2011 5:03:00 AM

hey Kash love it.. many congrats..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2011 3:19:00 AM

i like, like, kash...sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:11:00 PM

Congrats Kash on second place win with this stunning entry my friend.. wonderful write luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 4:10:00 PM

yes ...perfection Kash as this vivid piece indicates winning wonder luv..good luck...so glad u enjoyed my spiritual side ..luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 9/3/2011 9:50:00 AM

nice images, kashi, thnx for visiting and good luck, jag

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2011 9:36:00 AM

Good morn, Kash..This is subtle..image is soothing...tying in mother's cradling lap changes the ending to magnificence! Please check email for a short lil note. Thanks, best to u and your whole family this holiday weekend. Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 7:50:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one...Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2011 3:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/3/2011 3:16:00 AM

A gorgeous word picture Kash. a delight. good work. thank you for your pick up in my poem 'my ease' A slip up there. I stuck a little 'will' in and hope it floats. :-) cheers Marg...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2011 5:52:00 PM

W O N D E R F U L, kashi... a real winning material... go, go and cheers for being a PM!! ) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2011 2:26:00 PM

keep you pen flowing excellent

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 12:53:00 PM

wow, you are really getting into the essence of haiku, kash. VERY nicely donefor the contest. I am glad I caught this just on my way out the door.I plan to see two movies in a row. Just love my Fridays. Luv, Andrea ps. I beat you with my haiku by just a fraction of time!