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Dancing Underneath the Moonlight

As we danced underneath the moonlight
our hearts beat as one on that dark night



*photo 2

Inspired by Joseph May's “ Crystal Clear”
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5-4-19

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Caren Krutsinger

May 9, 2019 at 12:55 AM

Tender. Sweet. Poetic.

Jennifer Proxenos

May 7, 2019 at 1:59 PM

Can actually see this scene in my minds eye - nothing more romantic than what you poetically describe so delightfully! Hugs, Jennifer.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 7, 2019 at 8:29 AM

Two lines filled with wonderful imagery.

Gershon Wolf

May 6, 2019 at 2:35 PM

Two lines = Romance forever! Bravo, Alexis. ~ gw

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 12:09 PM

Well done!

Robert Lindley

May 5, 2019 at 8:33 AM

*Beat as one in time's grasp. Its locket with golden clasp.* A love in true moonlight. *A moment dear and right..... Your fine creation inspired me and deserved a short tribute paid it in return my friend.. A fav..

Alexis Y.

May 5, 2019 at 8:53 AM

WoW! Robert, What a comment! Thanks for the tribute and for faving me. I appreciate it very much my friend. You have made my day:-) Alexis