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Dancing Underneath the Moonlight

As we danced underneath the moonlight our hearts beat as one on that dark night *photo 2 Inspired by Joseph May's “ Crystal Clear” contest 5-4-19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/9/2019 12:55:00 AM

Tender. Sweet. Poetic.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/7/2019 1:59:00 PM

Can actually see this scene in my minds eye - nothing more romantic than what you poetically describe so delightfully! Hugs, Jennifer.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/7/2019 8:29:00 AM

Two lines filled with wonderful imagery.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/6/2019 2:35:00 PM

Two lines = Romance forever! Bravo, Alexis. ~ gw

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/6/2019 12:09:00 PM

Well done!

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/5/2019 8:33:00 AM

*Beat as one in time's grasp. Its locket with golden clasp.* A love in true moonlight. *A moment dear and right..... Your fine creation inspired me and deserved a short tribute paid it in return my friend.. A fav..

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/5/2019 8:53:00 AM

WoW! Robert, What a comment! Thanks for the tribute and for faving me. I appreciate it very much my friend. You have made my day:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2019 6:42:00 AM

Beautiful, very romantic two lines...

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/4/2019 5:47:00 PM

Well Done, Alexis: Everyone's heart beats as one when they dance.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/4/2019 3:31:00 PM

Nice to read today Alexis. Well done :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/4/2019 1:51:00 PM

Very romantic, you should enter it ? Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 1:46:00 PM

- A romantic evening, Alexis :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)