Dancing To Music Only She Could Hear

A melody was playing in her mind
She was dancing about with a great big smile
Dancing to music only she could hear
I thought she was dancing with Richard gere
I thought of ballet as she gracefully moved
An exquisite dance like a fountain of tunes
She came by my side and took my hand
Into this wonderful fantasy land
We were dancing around without any sound
Floating on clouds that weren’t around  
Dancing to music only she could hear
This passion burning within her tears





© Copyright KC.Leake
3rd October 2015
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Date: 10/7/2015 1:30:00 PM
You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Good story, good poem. It flows well and holds your interest from start to finish. A delightful poem full of joy filled energy of a spirited woman and her art of dance. Emile.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/8/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thanks Emile, I do appreciate your comments, thanks for the read Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/5/2015 1:47:00 PM
A beautiful and touching poem, Kevin - I enjoyed reading it ... CayCay
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/6/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Caycay, For your read and comment God Bless Kevin
Date: 10/3/2015 12:46:00 PM
- Lovely ...... I hope you're good to dance :) - I wish you luck in the contest, Kevin - And, best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 1:34:00 PM
I hope I am too Anne, Thanks for dropping by and commenting Best wishes Kevin
Date: 10/3/2015 10:16:00 AM
Very nice flow to your words that image the romantic scene of "floating on clouds..." All the best for the contest, Kevin! Sanda
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thank you sandra, I appreciate your comment Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/3/2015 10:09:00 AM
very graceful,Kevin.loved it.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Miraj, Glad you liked it!! Best Wishes Kevin
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