Dancing May Be of Waltz

in sweet there's no sour
sour can be mixed 
to make disguised face
masquerade may be fixed

real is real hides inner 
union may be false
in true love in all condition
dancing may be of Watlz
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Lovely thoughtful expressions beautifully composed. To be 'in sync' one does not exist without the other. A joyful read :-) blessings, lynn
Devnath  Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 2:34 PM
- A harmonious interaction between two in a beautiful dance, Bl - Lovely :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Trifiatis Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 2:13 PM
True, it is the sour that makes the sweet tasty! Fine thought provoking verses my friend, Cloudy!
Devnath  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 2:12 PM
love is always a dance for two, bl... splendid , meaningful work.. huggs
Devnath  Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thanks my friend for your beautiful comment. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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