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palm tree gently sways dancing the hula hula in Hawaiian skirt 12th March 2015

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Date: 3/23/2015 5:20:00 AM
Another lovely imagery!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/23/2015 12:07:00 PM
Thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/14/2015 9:51:00 AM
Wow! beautiful imagery. A cute poem beautifully written. Enjoyed a lot, my lovely friend. A 7 i feel here. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thanks so much for dropping by BL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 1:26:00 PM
Lovely haiku which puts on a lovely show thanks to the delightful imagery. Excellent! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/13/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 8:55:00 AM
Just gotta visit Hawaii one time before I meet my maker! You've captured the flavour, methinks! Hugs, Jack xx
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Date: 3/13/2015 9:01:00 AM
I will join you there Jack lol:-) I have always wanted to visit:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/13/2015 5:45:00 AM
Ah, I have spent some months in Hawaii isles! Your exotic Haiku, certainly, made me nostalgic! Thank you for it! A seven!
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Date: 3/13/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios - we do have palm trees on our Island - sadly we don't have the warm sunny climate of Hawaii lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 7:28:00 PM
Is that what you look like? I miss my days in Maui! brings backs memories!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 7:33:00 PM
ha ha ha oh I wish:-) we do have palm tress but that is only because our Island is in the gulf stream - it is far from warm here lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 2:54:00 PM
HAHA cute!!! love it lady! :) :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 2:38:00 PM
lol with a pina colada
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 2:42:00 PM
Ohhh no had one of those for years Gerald! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 1:50:00 PM
Very nice. I'm transported to a trail by the beach. And dodging coconuts.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by with your comment Cordon:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 1:46:00 PM
Unique and original. I love it.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Armand:-) I wrote this whilst travelling on the bus yesterday along with 3 other poems:-) We do actually have palm trees on our little Island - shame we don't have the sunshine to go with them!:-) Hugs Jan xx