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Dancing In the Wind

palm tree gently sways
dancing the hula hula
in Hawaiian skirt

12th March 2015

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Lei Strauss

March 23, 2015 at 5:20 AM

Another lovely imagery!

Jan Allison

March 23, 2015 at 12:07 PM

Thanks my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

March 14, 2015 at 9:51 AM

Wow! beautiful imagery. A cute poem beautifully written. Enjoyed a lot, my lovely friend. A 7 i feel here. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

March 14, 2015 at 10:37 AM

Thanks so much for dropping by BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

March 13, 2015 at 1:26 PM

Lovely haiku which puts on a lovely show thanks to the delightful imagery. Excellent! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

March 13, 2015 at 6:38 PM

Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

March 13, 2015 at 8:55 AM

Just gotta visit Hawaii one time before I meet my maker! You've captured the flavour, methinks! Hugs, Jack xx

Jan Allison

March 13, 2015 at 9:01 AM

I will join you there Jack lol:-) I have always wanted to visit:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 13, 2015 at 5:45 AM

Ah, I have spent some months in Hawaii isles! Your exotic Haiku, certainly, made me nostalgic! Thank you for it! A seven!

Jan Allison

March 13, 2015 at 7:38 AM

Thanks Demetrios - we do have palm trees on our Island - sadly we don't have the warm sunny climate of Hawaii lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Willow Lawrence

March 12, 2015 at 7:28 PM

Is that what you look like? I miss my days in Maui! brings backs memories!

Jan Allison

March 12, 2015 at 7:33 PM

ha ha ha oh I wish:-) we do have palm tress but that is only because our Island is in the gulf stream - it is far from warm here lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

March 12, 2015 at 2:54 PM

HAHA cute!!! love it lady! :) :)

Jan Allison

March 12, 2015 at 2:57 PM

Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jerry Swana

March 12, 2015 at 2:38 PM

lol with a pina colada

Jan Allison

March 12, 2015 at 2:42 PM

Ohhh no had one of those for years Gerald! Hugs Jan xx

Cordon Bittner

March 12, 2015 at 1:50 PM

Very nice. I'm transported to a trail by the beach. And dodging coconuts.

Jan Allison

March 12, 2015 at 1:56 PM

Thanks for dropping by with your comment Cordon:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

March 12, 2015 at 1:46 PM

Unique and original. I love it.

Jan Allison

March 12, 2015 at 1:48 PM

Thanks Armand:-) I wrote this whilst travelling on the bus yesterday along with 3 other poems:-) We do actually have palm trees on our little Island - shame we don't have the sunshine to go with them!:-) Hugs Jan xx

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