Brenda Mcgrath Poet Rhyme

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Dancing In the Rain

The heavens have opened up, it is pouring outside.
The flowers and trees will be happy tonight.
God heard nature's thirsty cry, now all is well.
It is a welcome rain after a hot, dry spell.

Watching the rain brings back happy memories as a child,
Playing in a downpour, being free and wild.
You never see adults impulsively dancing in the rain.
Pure joy is at our fingertips, if we just act like a child again.








Written 9/25/16

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Jan Allison September 27, 2016 at 7:37 AM Your poem really made me smile Brenda - oh those carefree days of childhood where nothing phased us... I don't dance in the rain but i don't mind walking in it:-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Mcgrath September 29, 2016 at 10:23 AM Thank you Jan. It's been awhile since I danced in the rain too.

CayCay Godwin September 25, 2016 at 8:09 PM Delightful, Brenda - a simple gift simply presented as a reminder to us all. I enjoyed your write. (Hey, some #s messed with the end of line 2, stanza 2.) All the best ... CayCay Brenda Mcgrath September 25, 2016 at 8:23 PM Thank you CayCay. Yes I just saw the error. Sometimes when it posts it does strange things. I fixed it. :)