Dancing In the Rain

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Dancing in the rain, bliss throbs spear Fabric of innocence We choose joy so that God draws near In full luminescence Liken life to a dream Where myriad forms stream Become then, love sunbeam Transmuting our pain Dancing in the rain 01-November-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/11/2021 11:55:00 AM

If more people understood the logic of this "Transmuting our pain Dancing in the rain" we would have a much happier world.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/1/2021 7:29:00 AM

Oh, how much I love that phrase and the feeling - "dancing in the rain". A beautiful poem, Dear Poet, using your own invented form! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/1/2021 8:14:00 AM

Thank you dear Mala! Happy you enjoyed :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2021 2:47:00 AM

You'll get drenched. Joking apart, a lively poem.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/1/2021 8:15:00 AM

Your encouragement keeps me going, Victor!