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Dancing In the Rain

Dancing in the rain, bliss throbs spear
Fabric of innocence 
We choose joy so that God draws near
In full luminescence 

Liken life to a dream
Where myriad forms stream
Become then, love sunbeam

Transmuting our pain
Dancing in the rain

01-November-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger November 11, 2021 at 11:55 AM If more people understood the logic of this "Transmuting our pain Dancing in the rain" we would have a much happier world.

Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2021 at 7:29 AM Oh, how much I love that phrase and the feeling - "dancing in the rain". A beautiful poem, Dear Poet, using your own invented form! Love and blessings ~ Mala Unseeking Seeker November 1, 2021 at 8:14 AM Thank you dear Mala! Happy you enjoyed :)

Victor Buhagiar November 1, 2021 at 2:47 AM You'll get drenched. Joking apart, a lively poem. Unseeking Seeker November 1, 2021 at 8:15 AM Your encouragement keeps me going, Victor!