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Dancing In the Breeze

How often have I felt like this, my dear How often have I felt The breeze ruffling my hair, Whilst you laughed and kissed me fair? Times when we went to walk Along the promenade Sit on a bench and talk And silently I prayed. Will we live happily together? Will we build up a great affair? Will our lives beat the bad weather? Who will listen to our prayer? How often have I felt like this, my dear How often have I felt The breeze ruffling my hair, Whilst you laughed and kissed me fair? How many lonely years must pass Before we tie our marriage knot? Can’t you decide and solve our impasse For I am not some worthless robot. Perhaps the breeze will bring me luck, You will accept me as I am. All our tiny problems come unstuck Like all those cars in our traffic jam. How often have I felt like this, my dear How often have I felt The breeze ruffling my hair, Whilst you laughed and kissed me fair. We move on to the beach hand in hand And feel your warmth despite the breeze There on the sand we’ll dance to the band Knowing all my wishes you’ll appease.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/28/2021 3:44:00 AM
Well composed with so many beautiful feelings and smooth imagery .I could feel the breeze while reading .
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Date: 8/19/2021 12:01:00 PM
Well crafted with deep feeling.
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Date: 8/17/2021 8:00:00 AM
one can feel the longing through your words, bittersweet poem... wonderful write Victor... hugs
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Date: 8/17/2021 5:29:00 AM
A lovely, lively lyrical poem Victor, makes me want to get up and dance. singing those words… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 8/17/2021 2:13:00 AM
- These thoughts and prayers will be heard ... a heart of love and longing ... a sensitive and beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2021 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful write... Enjoyed the read... Thank you so much for sharing...
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Date: 8/16/2021 10:49:00 PM
Lovely lyric, Victor, a song of love and happiness found:)
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:37:00 PM
Another level!
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Date: 8/16/2021 3:11:00 PM
so lovely and it flows just like a song. Well, with that refrain, you need some notes to go with it!!
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Date: 8/16/2021 11:44:00 AM
I loved this romantic dancing in the breeze. I hope that what happened next was just as happy. Hugs.
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Date: 8/16/2021 11:01:00 AM
Victor, I hope all your prayers were answered, and love was constant. Romance at its best...Delice
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:02:00 AM
Sigh. Loneliness can drive us insane. Wonderful Romantic write .
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Date: 8/16/2021 6:43:00 AM
Victor...great, great verses...I really love this...uniquely penned. Felt as if K were there!.. Have to Fav this. Love, Panagiota
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Date: 8/16/2021 5:41:00 AM
Much longing in this emotive, romantic write, Victor. Enjoyed the walk on the beach in your footprints. Excellent, as always.
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Date: 8/16/2021 5:04:00 AM
A wonderful romantic story Victor, Very nicely penned..
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Date: 8/16/2021 4:58:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this romantic lyric Victor.. Have a great blessed day... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/16/2021 4:53:00 AM
Romantic poetry with a deep sense and love to your soul's heart Victor, yearning, and beautiful memories. Your language is flowing effortlessly, adding to the enchantment of your excellent writing: blessings and best wishes.
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Date: 8/16/2021 12:04:00 AM
A poem of longing, I hope she said yes. Tom
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