Dancing Hooves

as tambourines pulse...
 
    stallions rock with gypsies' whirl

        firing dance of  hooves






12/27/ 2016    John  lawless Contest
The TROIKA- (Haiku with hooves)

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Afzal Nusker

January 14, 2017 at 10:29 PM

So full of pizzazz. Congratulations, Nette.

Kim Rodrigues

January 14, 2017 at 6:36 PM

A lively scene! Congrats, Nette!

Agnes Krampe

January 14, 2017 at 3:11 PM

congrats on your win, nette

John Lawless

January 14, 2017 at 1:31 PM

Nette, this called up the visual in my mind before I ever saw the accompanying picture. thanks for entering the contest

Andrea Dietrich

January 3, 2017 at 10:37 AM

very cool image, Nette. I hope your new year has started with fireworks!! Mine hasn't. WE are snowed in. They cancelled my school today so I am kind of glad but at the same time, I really needed that money!!!