Dancing

I lie down on the Earth and stare at the moon, wondering how I'm supposed to 
move forward in life when everything important to me is motionless...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:24 PM
thank you for the reply
Austin Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Yes. The Moon winks back, but has no answers. Congrats on this fine poem. daver
Stephens Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:45 AM
Danku !
Gibson Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Brooke. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Stephens Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:45 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome !
A   Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Brooke, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
Stephens Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:43 AM
Oh wow ! That's fantastic ! I'm truly speechless! ( for once ) haha thank you!!!
Rashwan Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:57 PM
I love it! Simple maybe but beautiful and I think many can relate! Looking forward for more!
Stephens Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Thanks !
Eastman Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you make comments on others poems... It will give them a link to find yours... Don't forget to keep writing...
Stephens Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Thanks for the tip ! Will do !
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
Stephens Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:01 AM
So happy you not only enjoyed , but shared that joy with me. Thanks
A   Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Brooke, I don't know if this form is Monoku. Anyways, I love the verse, it's very deep, and pertains to the way I feel at times, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Stephens Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words :)
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 9:30 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brooke :) - I choose your first great written "Dancing" poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Stephens Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Much obliged ! Thank you
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