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Dancing

I lie down on the Earth and stare at the moon, wondering how I'm supposed to move forward in life when everything important to me is motionless...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:24:00 PM

thank you for the reply

Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2014 11:15:00 AM

Yes. The Moon winks back, but has no answers. Congrats on this fine poem. daver

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/29/2014 1:45:00 AM

Danku !

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/27/2014 6:47:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Brooke. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/29/2014 1:45:00 AM

Thank you for your warm welcome !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:21:00 PM

Brooke, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/29/2014 1:43:00 AM

Oh wow ! That's fantastic ! I'm truly speechless! ( for once ) haha thank you!!!

Ahmed Rashwan

Date: 7/27/2014 12:57:00 PM

I love it! Simple maybe but beautiful and I think many can relate! Looking forward for more!

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/29/2014 1:42:00 AM

Thanks !

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/26/2014 4:02:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you make comments on others poems... It will give them a link to find yours... Don't forget to keep writing...

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/27/2014 12:01:00 AM

Thanks for the tip ! Will do !

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/26/2014 3:51:00 PM

Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/27/2014 12:01:00 AM

So happy you not only enjoyed , but shared that joy with me. Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/26/2014 2:35:00 PM

Brooke, I don't know if this form is Monoku. Anyways, I love the verse, it's very deep, and pertains to the way I feel at times, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/27/2014 12:00:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2014 9:30:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brooke :) - I choose your first great written "Dancing" poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brooke Stephens
Date: 7/26/2014 11:56:00 PM

Much obliged ! Thank you