Dancing

D o you feel the urge to move 
A nd sway in a rhythmic way?
N eed to let the vibrations flow,
C ulminating in your toes?
I nclined to jump out of your seat,
N ever missing that base beat?
G ood to meet you...let's dance!
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Hello Jean, oh how I feel the urge to dance.It is a slow dance-someone has to ask me to dance. That was fun. have a nice day my friend.
Murray Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Hello Darlene. I had such an urge to dance last night, I hopped up in the pub to dance alone. I fully intend to repeat the show again this evening.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 5:19 PM
I love to dance too Jean. This is a sweet entry for the contest! Oh, I just see you won! Congratulations! ; ) xxoo
Murray Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 6:09 PM
I did! It's always such a thrill. Thank you Connie.
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Acrostic Word Play Contest, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:11 AM
A win is always such a confidence boost. Thank you Anna-Lise.
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:17 AM
It's hard not to start moving once we hear the beat. Great acrostic, Jean! Best wishes in Bobbie's contest, Carolyn
Murray Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Thank you Carolyn.
Salehi Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:52 AM
I can feel the joy of your dance...
Murray Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:26 AM
I just love it Pashang! It's what I will miss most when using a Zimmer frame.
Barden Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:38 PM
What a wonderful Acrostic, Jean ... oh, I enjoyed this very much! Best wishes and blessings to you! :-)
Murray Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:20 AM
Good morning and thank you Greg. Like you, music is in my DNA as my dad was a musician. The local dancehall owner said I was the best dancer. I take a retrospective bow.
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:37 PM
oh this was darling!! I used to love it too until my dizziness now makes it horrible to do!!
Murray Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Such a shame Andrea. It will have to be a slow waltz for you I'm afraid.
Bauer Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:19 PM
i can feel the joy in this poem, jean! let's dance indeed!
Murray Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Hi Ilene. I would love to bogie with you. Thank you for calling in.
Cunningham Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Can just visualize you Jean stepping it out. Good luck. Tom.
Murray Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:53 PM
It's one of the things I miss most from reckless youth Tom. Lovely to see you.
Pandit Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Very apt for the word play theme, Jean. I enjoyed the dance moves you articulated.
Murray Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 11:29 AM
Thank you Vijay. Sometimes at work, when I see the pharmacy porter coming with our drugs I sing "Hey Baby won't you take a chance... say that you will let me have this dance" And he does!!
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