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May 10, 2025

"Spring Monoku" contest

sponsor: JCB Brul

dances my soul

heart bursts in rhapsody watching garden glow in bridal makeover!
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your lovely "my soul dances" write. So much said in a few words. Have a blessed day with your win...........
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Paula. Working on a writing assignment, not being able to stay active on Soup. Monoku and Haiku are the best options for now. Hoping to come back after August. Warm wishes ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:21 PM
The bridal garden couldn’t be ever better! Congrats!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Dear Kim, so glad to find your inspiring comment. Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Lovely monoku, Malabika ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Dear Line. So glad you liked it.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:37 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Your inspiring comment means so much to me.
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:31 PM
So creative. I love it.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Delighted to know you liked.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 4:46 PM
Hello Mala, oh that is beautiful. Love & Friendship./Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Hello Mala, your welcome. Love & Friendship, Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Darlene. Really appreciate your comments.
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