Dance With Me

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DANCE WITH ME Hey! come on, get down, groove to the beat. Fun with free style, express yourself and improvise. Let joy, bliss show. Take my hand, lead me… swing to rock and roll, cha-cha, bachata to Latin tempo, slow dance to ballad.

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Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2023 3:11:00 AM

Congrats on your win Marilene, Nicely done

Marilene Evans
Date: 12/27/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement and compliment. Enjoy your day and Happy New Year.....

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/21/2023 11:03:00 AM

Marilene, this is as fun as the dance itself! "Fun!" Free." Full of joyful "bliss." In the summer our city sponsors Friday night free concerts. Everyone, of all ages, dances! Your words have captured that wonderful sense of "free style" on the dance floor! Merry Christmas! May Christmas dance in your heart!

Marilene Evans
Date: 12/21/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hello, Sam! Thanks for the compliment... We do have free concert during the summer weekends. I love, love "free style", probably because I'm free. Sometimes, I feel restricted with a partner and I kind of lead him. But, I have improvised ... I let him take the lead now, he said so with a laugh... lol... Merry Christmas...