L Milton Hankins Poet Haiku

Dance of the Daisies

wind ripples meadow
while white daisies dance wildly
long stems gyrating

written June 10, 2021

Entered "Bite Size Poetry No. 8" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Brian Strand's "All Yours" Contest

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Terry Flood June 13, 2021 at 6:09 AM Congrats on your win, Milt. Glad my garden was able to inspire you... now... what do you know about moles? Terry L Milton Hankins June 13, 2021 at 7:59 AM Absolutely nothing, Terry, but I'll try to come up with a haiku on moles for you. Thanks so much for your comment.

Caren Krutsinger June 11, 2021 at 11:35 AM dance of the daisies - great imagery, perfect title! L Milton Hankins June 11, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thanks, Caren. I rather liked this one myself.

Kai Michael Neumann June 11, 2021 at 10:26 AM Nice one ... L Milton Hankins June 11, 2021 at 10:59 AM Thanks so much, Kai. I appreciate your read.

Judy Ball June 10, 2021 at 5:32 PM Lovely Haiku Milton. Love it. God Bless, JB L Milton Hankins June 10, 2021 at 6:38 PM Thanks, JB. I appreciate your read.

Gershon Wolf June 10, 2021 at 5:27 PM Daisy is pretty erotic these days, gyrating and all. Great imagery, Milt. L Milton Hankins June 10, 2021 at 6:38 PM Thanks, Gershon. Enjoy her...them...whatever!

Jan Allison June 10, 2021 at 2:50 PM delightful imagery i especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx L Milton Hankins June 10, 2021 at 4:11 PM Thanks, Jan. I'm so glad you liked it. Good image, eh?

Terry Flood June 10, 2021 at 2:41 PM You’ve seen my lawn then. Mowed it yesterday... today... white daisies dancing wildly. How does anything grow that quickly? Nice imagery, Milt. Just not on my lawn eh? ;-) Terry L Milton Hankins June 10, 2021 at 4:11 PM Ah, Terry, you just have to get used to them. It's dandelions here; daisies in mid-summer. Thanks for the read.