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Dance of the Daisies

wind ripples meadow while white daisies dance wildly long stems gyrating written June 10, 2021 Entered "Bite Size Poetry No. 8" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier FIRST PLACE WINNER Brian Strand's "All Yours" Contest

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Terry Flood

Date: 6/13/2021 6:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Milt. Glad my garden was able to inspire you... now... what do you know about moles? Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/13/2021 7:59:00 AM

Absolutely nothing, Terry, but I'll try to come up with a haiku on moles for you. Thanks so much for your comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2021 11:35:00 AM

dance of the daisies - great imagery, perfect title!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/11/2021 11:56:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I rather liked this one myself.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/11/2021 10:26:00 AM

Nice one ...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/11/2021 10:59:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kai. I appreciate your read.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/10/2021 5:32:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Milton. Love it. God Bless, JB

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/10/2021 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, JB. I appreciate your read.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/10/2021 5:27:00 PM

Daisy is pretty erotic these days, gyrating and all. Great imagery, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/10/2021 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Enjoy her...them...whatever!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2021 2:50:00 PM

delightful imagery i especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/10/2021 4:11:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I'm so glad you liked it. Good image, eh?

Terry Flood

Date: 6/10/2021 2:41:00 PM

You’ve seen my lawn then. Mowed it yesterday... today... white daisies dancing wildly. How does anything grow that quickly? Nice imagery, Milt. Just not on my lawn eh? ;-) Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/10/2021 4:11:00 PM

Ah, Terry, you just have to get used to them. It's dandelions here; daisies in mid-summer. Thanks for the read.