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Dance of the Angels

As white winged angels pin point their toes on a creamy cloud,
Ecstasy slowly discharge from love drenched chamber of their pure hearts
Solitary stars turn spectators of the magical dance

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/13/2011 6:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win in this contest too with this splendid write..love the winged angels dancing with pointed toes on clouds..gautami

Kash Poet

Date: 6/12/2011 6:21:00 PM

Wonderful Sijo ...Congrats Joseph on your win..thanks for your comments at my pages...

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/12/2011 12:07:00 PM

Quite a beautiful and dreamy feel to this Sijo of yours Joseph!! Congratulations on your win ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2011 11:11:00 AM

j.O.O., Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome entry short & carries a magical grace. I am also honored to have you supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/12/2011 9:47:00 AM

no wonder this places high-- I enjoyed this the first time around, enjoyed it again , Joseph -- super congrats on your win :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2011 8:58:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congrats Joseph on another fantastic win in PD's contest ..luv the title and content mucho luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2011 2:39:00 AM

there you go, joseph!! perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 9:28:00 PM

Just rereading this lovely one. Sorry it did not place. Thanks for your nice words on my writing. Let me see one more of yours before I turn in for the night!

Joseph Osita
Date: 6/2/2011 2:31:00 PM

Dear Andrea,thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.I didn't submit the poem for the contest, though it was inspired by the picture of the contest

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/31/2011 1:51:00 PM

What a very beautiful take on the photo, Joseph :) enjoyed how you depict them as dancing angels :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/31/2011 1:27:00 AM

i sway with you, joseph... alluring imagery that is top-rate! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 11:54:00 PM

this is really pretty, Joseph. I am glad I got to see it tonight as I am getting ready to turn in now!

Faizah Spence

Date: 5/28/2011 3:33:00 PM

Sweet... Loved drenched chamber of their pure hearts... Love this line. ~Beloved Faizah