Joseph Osita Poet Sijo

Dance of the Angels

As white winged angels pin point their toes on a creamy cloud,
Ecstasy slowly discharge from love drenched chamber of their pure hearts
Solitary stars turn spectators of the magical dance

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Gautami Phookan June 13, 2011 at 6:36 AM Congrats on your win in this contest too with this splendid write..love the winged angels dancing with pointed toes on clouds..gautami

Kash Poet June 12, 2011 at 6:21 PM Wonderful Sijo ...Congrats Joseph on your win..thanks for your comments at my pages...

Wilma Neels June 12, 2011 at 12:07 PM Quite a beautiful and dreamy feel to this Sijo of yours Joseph!! Congratulations on your win ;)

Poet Destroyer A June 12, 2011 at 11:11 AM j.O.O., Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome entry short & carries a magical grace. I am also honored to have you supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 12, 2011 at 9:47 AM no wonder this places high-- I enjoyed this the first time around, enjoyed it again , Joseph -- super congrats on your win :D

Dr.Ram Mehta June 12, 2011 at 8:58 AM My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 8:02 AM Congrats Joseph on another fantastic win in PD's contest ..luv the title and content mucho luv..

Nette Onclaud June 12, 2011 at 2:39 AM there you go, joseph!! perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 9:28 PM Just rereading this lovely one. Sorry it did not place. Thanks for your nice words on my writing. Let me see one more of yours before I turn in for the night! Joseph Osita June 2, 2011 at 2:31 PM Dear Andrea,thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.I didn't submit the poem for the contest, though it was inspired by the picture of the contest

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 31, 2011 at 1:51 PM What a very beautiful take on the photo, Joseph :) enjoyed how you depict them as dancing angels :)

Nette Onclaud May 31, 2011 at 1:27 AM i sway with you, joseph... alluring imagery that is top-rate! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2011 at 11:54 PM this is really pretty, Joseph. I am glad I got to see it tonight as I am getting ready to turn in now!

Faizah Spence May 28, 2011 at 3:33 PM Sweet... Loved drenched chamber of their pure hearts... Love this line. ~Beloved Faizah

Dr.Ram Mehta May 27, 2011 at 2:04 PM Nice expressions with lovely imagery on dance of the the angels, Joseph