Dance of Love

I look in  your  dark  eyes and  I see the light
And the gleam of love so  indestructible
I give you all I am  and I hold you  tight 
Only with you my dreams are achievable.


We are within   our  imperfect universe 
'Cause so  deep within we can have everything
We are as one with time running in  reverse
You are  my desire and you taste  my  heart  string.

You penetrate me and you change me forever
You  can  take everything  and give  everything
It's a madness when my feelings you devour
We eat each other we feel like exploding


It is a connection between soul and  body
We dance the feelings , the tears,  and the passion.
In the rhythm of stars  love  need to embody
Dance  intricately intertwines our vision.

We throw  our bodies language in romance
Love is like a star  losing its mass and  ray
You push the limit to ecstasy  and trance
And dance my dreams there for being the same clay .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 1:19 AM
emotions well portrayed
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Marieta. Love, Carol
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October 28, 2010 at 7:35 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marieta. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 27, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Hi Marieta.I really liked this it is so full of wonderful phrasing showing feelings and the power of love. I like the rhythm and the idea of the dance of love.It does whirl us around,spinning us off our feet and yes it is as you say a madness but so wonderful when it works.Thank you for an enjoyable read Luv June(sylvia)
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October 26, 2010 at 7:32 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight .. with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to all new members ...good luck with luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Passionate and sensuous write on the feelings of love, Marieta. I have visited you country in the year to attend world Congress of poets held at Iasi, a beautiful city.
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October 26, 2010 at 3:20 PM
sounds like a good time... enjoyed your work!
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