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Dance of Love

I look in your dark eyes and I see the light And the gleam of love so indestructible I give you all I am and I hold you tight Only with you my dreams are achievable. We are within our imperfect universe 'Cause so deep within we can have everything We are as one with time running in reverse You are my desire and you taste my heart string. You penetrate me and you change me forever You can take everything and give everything It's a madness when my feelings you devour We eat each other we feel like exploding It is a connection between soul and body We dance the feelings , the tears, and the passion. In the rhythm of stars love need to embody Dance intricately intertwines our vision. We throw our bodies language in romance Love is like a star losing its mass and ray You push the limit to ecstasy and trance And dance my dreams there for being the same clay .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 1:19:00 AM
emotions well portrayed
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Marieta. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2010 7:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marieta. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:27:00 AM
Hi Marieta.I really liked this it is so full of wonderful phrasing showing feelings and the power of love. I like the rhythm and the idea of the dance of love.It does whirl us around,spinning us off our feet and yes it is as you say a madness but so wonderful when it works.Thank you for an enjoyable read Luv June(sylvia)
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight .. with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to all new members ...good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 4:14:00 PM
Passionate and sensuous write on the feelings of love, Marieta. I have visited you country in the year to attend world Congress of poets held at Iasi, a beautiful city.
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:20:00 PM
sounds like a good time... enjoyed your work!
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