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Dance In the Rain

DANCE IN THE RAIN Come and let us wash all our cares away dancing in this gentle rain together to enjoy every moment of the day. Join in with me, oh come and don't delay this time we have will not last forever come and let us wash all our cares away. In mud puddles we can joyfully play act like gleeful children being clever to enjoy every moment of the day. Showers continue down we dance and pray giving grateful thanks for worries never come and let us wash all our cares away. These springtime showers that are on display shimmering drops that sparkle together to enjoy every moment of the day. Precious is this child-like fun we now play so join with us in this rainy weather come and let us wash all our cares away. to enjoy every moment of the day. Copyright © Vivien Wade Oct.6, 2015 villanelle 10 line syllables

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Date: 11/30/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. I'm new to the Villanelle form, but enjoy the challenge. I have another on poetrysoup called 'The Chair' Hope you will try the form and enjoy it. Blessings,Vivien
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Date: 11/30/2017 4:14:00 PM
This was a very enjoyable poem to read, Vivien. I have never tried to write a villanelle; I should try it. You did a very nice job with it. John
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Date: 11/30/2017 9:02:00 AM
Heard a rooster with a humbling hen; Signed his name with a golden pen; Rumor heard; Trump absurd; Has learned how to count his each sin.
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Vivien Wade
Date: 11/30/2017 4:46:00 PM
Love your sense of humor. Very clever. Must read more of your poems.
Date: 11/28/2017 4:35:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, which is an encouragement. Blessings, Vivien
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Date: 11/28/2017 6:11:00 AM
Very sweet. Well done, Vivien.
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I am enjoying learning new forms of poetry. I also enjoy your poems, but sometimes don't comment because you have received so many. bleswsings, Vivien
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Date: 11/27/2017 5:10:00 PM
Excellent. Very enjoyable poem to read :)
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