Poet. Undertaker Poet Monoku

Dance

a breeze chills as the dry leave dance - my heart SING?



rewritten on 12-12-2013 taking help from my friend Poet.Debbie Guzzi.



Breeze chill, dry leaves dance - my heart too...


 written on 11-12-2013 for the contest "monoku form or free verse" by Broken wings

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Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2016 at 10:14 PM POET UNDERTAKER, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line... LOVE LINDA

Charmaine Chircop January 28, 2014 at 2:44 AM A beautiful imagery..evoking emotion and teases the senses!!!Charma

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2013 at 4:56 PM I like the monoku...The wet leaves have been dancing here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2013 at 1:14 AM I LOVE the imagery in this . GOod luck in the contest, my friend.

Kelly Deschler December 13, 2013 at 11:25 PM My heart dances, too, when I am outside experiencing nature's beauty! Great work, Jenish! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for my placement in your contest. I really appreciate the recognition.

Judy Konos December 13, 2013 at 8:14 AM I like both versions very much. And I thank you for my placement in your contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2013 at 10:36 AM - Like it, well done Jenish ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta December 11, 2013 at 4:28 AM Nice image you have created so well,Jenish