Dance

a breeze chills as the dry leave dance - my heart SING? rewritten on 12-12-2013 taking help from my friend Poet.Debbie Guzzi. Breeze chill, dry leaves dance - my heart too... written on 11-12-2013 for the contest "monoku form or free verse" by Broken wings

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2016 10:14:00 PM

POET UNDERTAKER, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line... LOVE LINDA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/28/2014 2:44:00 AM

A beautiful imagery..evoking emotion and teases the senses!!!Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2013 4:56:00 PM

I like the monoku...The wet leaves have been dancing here..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 1:14:00 AM

I LOVE the imagery in this . GOod luck in the contest, my friend.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/13/2013 11:25:00 PM

My heart dances, too, when I am outside experiencing nature's beauty! Great work, Jenish! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for my placement in your contest. I really appreciate the recognition.

Judy Konos

Date: 12/13/2013 8:14:00 AM

I like both versions very much. And I thank you for my placement in your contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/11/2013 10:36:00 AM

- Like it, well done Jenish ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/11/2013 4:28:00 AM

Nice image you have created so well,Jenish