Dance

The sun is shining
the flowers blooming
n I am dancing
with the butterflies.

The moon is winking
the stars twinkling
n I am dancing
with the fireflies.

The rain is falling
The fishes swimming
n I am dancing 
with the mermaids.

The birds are singing
dawn time's ringing
n I am dancing 
with the king's maids.

The sun is shining
the rain is falling
n I am still dancing
on and on.

I am still dancing
on and on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/3/2009 1:56:00 PM
wow The sun is shining the flowers blooming n I am dancing with the butterflies. The moon is winking the stars twinkling n I am dancing with the fireflies. The rain is falling The fishes swimming n I am dancing with the mermaids. The birds are singing dawn time's ringing n I am dancing with the king's maids. The sun is shining the rain is falling n I am still dancing on and on. I am still dancing on and on.
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:40:00 AM
cute poem.
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:51:00 AM
This is so uplifting, and cheery on a dark morning!! Thank you for the day brightener!!!! love, Carrie
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Date: 4/8/2009 6:20:00 AM
Wow. If this isn't happy I don't know what is! Thanks for spreading it around. Beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:48:00 PM
Your joyful heart shines in this delightful, uplifting poem, Maryam. A pleasure to read!
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:16:00 PM
Smile~And don't ever stop dancing "Dear Precious & Gifted Maryam!!!":):)~For "Your Beauty" shall be seen by all of those around "You"~And "You" shall become a reverberating and rippling tide, unto their priceless hearts and souls!!!:):)~Smile, "Beautiful Write!!!":):)~And, "Have A Very Perfect Day~Filled With Happiness & Love, Always, John!!!:):) Bye Maryam ~
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