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Down from the lofty tower of love. Again I recall the times we together cherished, Many times we risked storms of discord And now all the steam has finally perished.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/8/2015 9:37:00 AM
great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?
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Date: 5/6/2015 10:31:00 AM
DAMA good poem!
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:38:00 AM
Very touching and heartfelt write. I really enjoyed this one. And thanks for visiting my poem "A Homophonic Incident of Her Life " and commenting so generously.
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Date: 4/29/2015 10:40:00 AM
Wonderful write, I am back on line.
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Date: 4/29/2015 7:41:00 AM
- Touching - Well written, Hannington - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 7:06:00 AM
This is so wonderful! I love this! And thank you for commenting.
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:31:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 4/28/2015 11:07:00 PM
We torture our souls for the sake of love, but it is worth it. Wonderful little gem this poem is Hanninington!
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:18:00 AM
Life's a test.. and there are so many. Can we make the grade?
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:59:00 AM
Great writing style. I love how u use four lines to say all you need and make one understand the full story . Genius
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 4/27/2015 9:24:00 AM
Genius? Flattered to bits. Thanks dear....
Date: 4/27/2015 7:35:00 AM
Good one..If it doesn't last it probably wasn't true love..Enjoyed reading.Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 4/27/2015 7:44:00 AM
It wasn't true - you are right,Sara!
Date: 4/26/2015 12:43:00 PM
I felt your heart through your words and it felt good. Emile.
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:40:00 PM
Better to have loved and lost than never loved at all aye? Light & Love
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Hannington Mumo
Date: 4/27/2015 7:44:00 AM
A lot of wisdom there...Thanks!
Date: 4/25/2015 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful write and a 7. I hope your doing well? Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:09:00 AM
My, My Joseph, you are a man after my own heart. Those words was so heart felt. #7
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Deborah Turner
Date: 4/25/2015 8:20:00 AM
I am so sorry Hannington, I meant to put your name instead of Joseph. Please forgive me.

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