Dama

Down from the lofty tower of love.
Again I recall the times we together cherished,
Many times we risked storms of discord
And now all the steam has finally perished.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 9:37 AM
great lines, wonderful expressions. What better way for this message to flow?
Konos Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:31 AM
DAMA good poem!
Garg Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Very touching and heartfelt write. I really enjoyed this one. And thanks for visiting my poem "A Homophonic Incident of Her Life " and commenting so generously.
Turner Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Wonderful write, I am back on line.
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 7:41 AM
- Touching - Well written, Hannington - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Judas Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 7:06 AM
This is so wonderful! I love this! And thank you for commenting.
Sathasivam Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 2:31 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:07 PM
We torture our souls for the sake of love, but it is worth it. Wonderful little gem this poem is Hanninington!
C. Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Life's a test.. and there are so many. Can we make the grade?
Moemise Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Great writing style. I love how u use four lines to say all you need and make one understand the full story . Genius
Mumo Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Genius? Flattered to bits. Thanks dear....
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Good one..If it doesn't last it probably wasn't true love..Enjoyed reading.Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Mumo Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:44 AM
It wasn't true - you are right,Sara!
Pinet Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:43 PM
I felt your heart through your words and it felt good. Emile.
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Better to have loved and lost than never loved at all aye? Light & Love
Mumo Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:44 AM
A lot of wisdom there...Thanks!
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Beautiful write and a 7. I hope your doing well? Blessings dear friend Eve
Turner Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:09 AM
My, My Joseph, you are a man after my own heart. Those words was so heart felt. #7
Turner Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:20 AM
I am so sorry Hannington, I meant to put your name instead of Joseph. Please forgive me.
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