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dam hiku

For Brian Strand's Your Choice V Poetry Contest 7 June 2025 _________ water held so still, ________ p \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ o \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ w w \ \ \ \ sleeps behind the \ \ \ a e \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ l r \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ l, ________ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ / /I ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ / / I I rivers wait to run. First Prize Winner

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Ghairo Daniels

Date: 6/9/2025 12:53:00 AM

Congrats, Sir. U are becoming an Ace at this form. I felt the water when reading it. ThU for offering. X.

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/9/2025 3:31:00 PM

Thanks. Just trying to be creative by facing this new poetry challenge. Your words are well appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2025 2:13:00 PM

Great job. Big congrats

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:23:00 PM

Thanks, Ma'am Rea. I enjoy doing this kind of poetry. It's a challenge. And you are one of my inspirations.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2025 5:47:00 AM

This is very cool! Imaginative! You exhibit the power held! A huge CONGRATS! Fave

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:26:00 PM

Thanks, Ma'am Kim. Your huge CONGRATS boosted my enthusiasm. I also love your works.

JCB Brul

Date: 6/7/2025 11:27:00 PM

What a stunning illustration!!! Congratulations bro Bernard. ^___^

Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:29:00 PM

Thanks, Sister JCB. Creativity is truly needed here he-he-he. It's a challenging task indeed.