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For Brian Strand's Your Choice V Poetry Contest 7 June 2025 _________ water held so still, ________ p \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ o \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ w w \ \ \ \ sleeps behind the \ \ \ a e \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ l r \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ l, ________ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ / /I ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ / / I I rivers wait to run. First Prize Winner

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Date: 6/9/2025 12:53:00 AM
Congrats, Sir. U are becoming an Ace at this form. I felt the water when reading it. ThU for offering. X.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/9/2025 3:31:00 PM
Thanks. Just trying to be creative by facing this new poetry challenge. Your words are well appreciated.
Date: 6/8/2025 2:13:00 PM
Great job. Big congrats
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:23:00 PM
Thanks, Ma'am Rea. I enjoy doing this kind of poetry. It's a challenge. And you are one of my inspirations.
Date: 6/8/2025 5:47:00 AM
This is very cool! Imaginative! You exhibit the power held! A huge CONGRATS! Fave
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:26:00 PM
Thanks, Ma'am Kim. Your huge CONGRATS boosted my enthusiasm. I also love your works.
Date: 6/7/2025 11:27:00 PM
What a stunning illustration!!! Congratulations bro Bernard. ^___^
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/8/2025 7:29:00 PM
Thanks, Sister JCB. Creativity is truly needed here he-he-he. It's a challenging task indeed.

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