Dallying

How your beauteous face stirs me
as I gaze into your startling eyes
deep blue pools of mystery I see
you hold me bound by satin ties

Your hair shines like ravens wings
a riotous windswept mass of curls
as I gaze up on you my heart sings
seeming to turn in spins and whirls

Your figure so perfectly curved
I just yearn to be in your arms
your piecing gaze has me unnerved
and yet I am pulled by your charms

Dallying together, passions rising
soon we will be wed as man and wife 
for now we just play, do some musing
of emotions which do now run so rife


written for National Poetry Day
10/03/2013

I tried to leave which sex to the readers imagination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 9:19 AM
Passsionate work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 4:44 PM
hi Sara Ty for your nice review Shadow x smile
Mohammed Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Lovely work my dear Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:15 AM
Dearest M.M ty my friend appreciated love Shadow xox smile
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Ha ha, good for you. This was a very sexy piece.
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:14 AM
hi Richard sorry for slow reply (had no internet) glad you liked it ty for reading Shadow x smile
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Hmmm, you are teasing us. by saying "for now we just play" I can interpret that one of two ways!!! I like what Carrie said, Stirring the sex pot!!
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Hi Andrea I must have been too close to it lol I did not intend to tease but I see what you mean now. Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Richards Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 2:01 PM
The perfect title.........dallying is to tease.....flirt and stir the sex pot !! Yes!
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:11 AM
Lol Ty Carrie for your lovely review Shadow x smile
Devnath  Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Hi! my friend, just few minutes before I was thinking like it and am surprised that you have beautifully written the same. Miracle, it is. I think it's a kind of corruption of blackmailing love. Excellently done. I can,t do as you can. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Hi BL nice to see you Ty for your review life is strange lol Shadow x smile
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Shadow !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Ty Anne Lise much appreciated Shadow x smile
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