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Daisy Lane

Not marked on any mapped out town found where the country is green and brown, not on the gray, concrete corner of Main can you find your way to Daisy Lane No need to search for any road signs just follow to a place where the sun shines, and somehow always could, even in the rain over the beautiful spot named, Daisy Lane And waving from their wooded abode lined up to greet you along the dirt road, wildly bunched in their finest white array all looking like fresh snow in May They welcome you to sway on the breeze to hum with birds and bumble with bees, untie your shoes, let your feet go bare don't be surprised if you leave them there For you will find it hard to say goodbye when the sun decides to leave the sky, but return anytime you seek refrain and take a stroll down Daisy Lane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/9/2021 1:29:00 AM
Love the pattern since of longing to go back a hearts retreat davidscott
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/21/2023 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for reading... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, David :)
Date: 4/4/2020 1:42:00 PM
A lovely write Kelly, nice gentle flow that makes you smile.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/20/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you James... so glad you enjoyed my poem :) ... And, please forgive my late reply... I haven't been on Poetry Soup as often these days...
Date: 8/22/2019 11:56:00 AM
This poem leaves me with a very calm feeling, Kelly, you have created a very beautiful retreat. All the best. John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/12/2019 1:10:00 PM
Thanks John, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 7/17/2019 3:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem Kelly! I loved walking down the Daisy Lane! -Smita
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/21/2019 9:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Smita :)
Date: 7/5/2019 10:37:00 AM
A super piece Kelly with lovely imagery and great rhyme, Daisy Lane is a place would want to see! Trust all good with you, all fine over here!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/2/2019 9:51:00 PM
Many thanks Gordon... I'm glad to hear that! All is well here, just trying to cope with the heat and humidity that this summer has brought us :)
Date: 7/3/2019 3:41:00 PM
oh i love this poem ..its so down to earth and real...terrific poem my friend
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/2/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Jim... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this my friend :)
Date: 7/1/2019 12:54:00 PM
Hello Kelly ,I would like to go to Daisy lane to take a stroll. It sounds like a lovely spot. Have a nice day my friend.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/29/2019 9:29:00 PM
Thank you Darlene ... and you are welcome to visit Daisy Lane any time you wish :)
Date: 6/27/2019 7:24:00 AM
Humbled to the core...This is good...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/25/2019 8:58:00 PM
Thank you once again for your kind remarks :)
Date: 6/23/2019 5:14:00 AM
This is beautiful in its simplicity, Kelly! The simple offerings from nature can be truly captivating, and yet many are those who have no eyes for them....unfortunately they are the losers! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/12/2019 3:41:00 PM
Thank you my friend... You are so right! Those kinds of people just don't know what they're missing :)
Date: 6/14/2019 6:29:00 PM
G'day Kelly … a nice enjoyable poem to read. Thank you Kelly - Lindsay
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2019 10:49:00 PM
Hello there ... and thanks for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it Lindsay :)
Date: 6/13/2019 5:25:00 PM
This is super good...Enjoyed it all...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thanks for reading Arturo ... I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 6/13/2019 2:24:00 PM
what a sweet rhyme Kelly I would love to make a daisy chain on daisy lane - not made one since I was a small child lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/23/2019 11:06:00 PM
Many thanks for your lovely comment Jan! Hugs :)

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