Daisy

Daisy trips and falls apart
The mysterious rider brings her back
And now wonders how she ll find
The way back home cause is its off the line
And runs away leaving the rider alone
He comes back for her 
On the dark dawn
She refuses to go back to his lost life
The angered rider loses control
Cause daisy was the one whom he loved from soul
And for one last time he asks her to go
To the dark den with him for eternal light
For daisy nods no cause she loves her home
Fuming with fury he wins along 
Cause daisy said she will stand her ground
The rider calls in his horse to take  leave
Distressed yet still in love he climbs his horse
Galloping his horse he starts to race
While snatching daisy from her most beloved home
Cautious and anxious she struggles through the ride
Then comes the deepest valley with the bridge
Daisy unknown of the little bit of it 
Tussling and grappling the little doll piece
Falls of the bridge before he could grab her
Bawling for help when taws’ to late for her
And once again
Daisy trips and falls apart
But the mysterious rider on black mare couldn’t save her fall
For he is down with the heart ache of his lost love
And as said so........ 
He wanders on the edge of the bridge you see
In search of his lost love or her screams
not knowing its too late for all her pleas
'Cos the daisy was the one whom he loved from h soul.
And daisy said no cause she loved her home
And so goes the story of one lost soul who took control with her innocent prose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fiery Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 3:20 AM
Hey Lakshmi........god bless u ! What a beautiful poem....now one of my fav poem !
Manogaran Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:11 AM
brilliant poem !...7
Brown Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:31 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lakshmi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Robinson Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 9:57 AM
good work
Robinson Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 9:56 AM
GOOD
Taylor Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Awesome, lakshmi. Tragic and bittersweet story. Outstanding piece. Nice going. Welcome to PS. Hope to see more of your postings. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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