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Daisy

Daisy trips and falls apart The mysterious rider brings her back And now wonders how she ll find The way back home cause is its off the line And runs away leaving the rider alone He comes back for her On the dark dawn She refuses to go back to his lost life The angered rider loses control Cause daisy was the one whom he loved from soul And for one last time he asks her to go To the dark den with him for eternal light For daisy nods no cause she loves her home Fuming with fury he wins along Cause daisy said she will stand her ground The rider calls in his horse to take leave Distressed yet still in love he climbs his horse Galloping his horse he starts to race While snatching daisy from her most beloved home Cautious and anxious she struggles through the ride Then comes the deepest valley with the bridge Daisy unknown of the little bit of it Tussling and grappling the little doll piece Falls of the bridge before he could grab her Bawling for help when taws’ to late for her And once again Daisy trips and falls apart But the mysterious rider on black mare couldn’t save her fall For he is down with the heart ache of his lost love And as said so........ He wanders on the edge of the bridge you see In search of his lost love or her screams not knowing its too late for all her pleas 'Cos the daisy was the one whom he loved from h soul. And daisy said no cause she loved her home And so goes the story of one lost soul who took control with her innocent prose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 3:20:00 AM
Hey Lakshmi........god bless u ! What a beautiful poem....now one of my fav poem !
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Date: 4/19/2011 2:11:00 AM
brilliant poem !...7
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:31:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lakshmi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:57:00 AM
good work
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:56:00 AM
GOOD
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:38:00 AM
Awesome, lakshmi. Tragic and bittersweet story. Outstanding piece. Nice going. Welcome to PS. Hope to see more of your postings. Have a great weekend. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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