Daisies and Daffodils

(This is my first poem I every wrote so be gentle,I was very young when 
I wrote it-EMC Thx)



A sunny day lights our way,

To a field of daisies and daffodils,

With no clouds in sight,

We just might...

Bring our mother a pleasant sight.

What a smile it will yield,

When we bring mother to the field,

The field of daisies and daffodils
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Richards Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Lovely sweet, beautiful poem Ettie
Christian-Bowling Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Thx:)-Love Ettie
Anish Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Flowers are so nice. There is a café near me called Flowers - they offer a sandwich called the Woodstock which is very tasty. Sweet words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Christian-Bowling Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Lolz well that's a diff name for a sandwhich but it sounds good lolz thank you for stopping by-Love Ettie
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace