Daisies and Daffodils

(This is my first poem I every wrote so be gentle,I was very young when I wrote it-EMC Thx) A sunny day lights our way, To a field of daisies and daffodils, With no clouds in sight, We just might... Bring our mother a pleasant sight. What a smile it will yield, When we bring mother to the field, The field of daisies and daffodils

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Lisa Richards

Date: 8/9/2014 9:11:00 PM

Lovely sweet, beautiful poem Ettie

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/13/2014 2:38:00 PM

Thx:)-Love Ettie

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/15/2014 1:41:00 PM

Flowers are so nice. There is a café near me called Flowers - they offer a sandwich called the Woodstock which is very tasty. Sweet words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/16/2014 2:57:00 PM

Lolz well that's a diff name for a sandwhich but it sounds good lolz thank you for stopping by-Love Ettie