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Daisies" by Lori Maria Walton Come walk with me among the daisies Not with the roses, as they have thorns But among the lucid pulchritude Waiting with open eyes to the sky For whom she lives Today, walk with me among the daisies Elevate your eyes to the indigo azure And ascertain love’s authentic disposition Contemplate the sheltering expanse dancing above Admiring the daisy field Walk with me among the daisies for a moment Knowing they fade into the winter Receding into the cold earthy mirth Waiting for the sun to coax a new blossom into obvious view Live with me among the daisies Bring your passions to these fields Inosculation of spirits Brios entwined in submission To the seasons of life Leave with me to the daisies When time can be no more When you are tired from the roses thorn And long for gentleness and mercy To hold you through the night Lay me softly among the daisies And let me dream of how they made you smile And you remembered life’s sweet innocence As you played in their petals creating A life of beauty and goodness

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Date: 9/24/2014 5:28:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lori Maria - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:42:00 PM
Beautiful writing, my friend. You have some natural talent that won't be denied... a big welcome to PSoup.... Jake
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Date: 9/22/2014 8:10:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful, Lori,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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