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In a meadow of daisies, The breeze blows Their scent to please and tease. Bumblebees mesmerize by their glow. The bee's fuzzy fuzz ease To lace themselves with a trace Of daisies yellow faces. Joe, on his knobby bend knees, Sneezes a bouquet he picks. Traces of white petals scattering on the spot. She loves me she loves me not. 10/21/2022

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Date: 10/21/2022 3:14:00 PM
Lovely poem Eve a favorite really appreciate the theme and the playing of words...
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Michael. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/21/2022 1:32:00 PM
Exquisite, beautiful, and dulcet poem. Regards.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your kind words, they mean a lot. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/21/2022 12:22:00 PM
Sweet and tender poem. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Many blessings my friend

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