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Daisies

In a meadow of daisies, 
    The breeze blows 
      Their scent to please and tease. 

  Bumblebees mesmerize by their glow. 
    The bee's fuzzy fuzz ease 
      To lace themselves with a trace 
        Of daisies yellow faces. 

  Joe, on his knobby bend knees,  
    Sneezes a bouquet he picks. 
      Traces of white  petals scattering on the spot. 
         She loves me she loves me not.

10/21/2022
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Tor Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Lovely poem Eve a favorite really appreciate the theme and the playing of words...
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Michael. Many blessings my friend
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October 21, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Exquisite, beautiful, and dulcet poem. Regards.
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October 25, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, for your kind words, they mean a lot. Many blessings my friend
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October 21, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Sweet and tender poem. Hugs.
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Victor. Many blessings my friend
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