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Daily Dewdrops

Quote: Every day is a page to write a new story.
DAILY DEWDROPS Freshly fallen snow, no print left yet. An empty box, with no pretty bow. I get down on my knees, to write a prayer - a wistful prayer of bittersweet. My finger shivers in the breeze. I cursively draw, on this wall of white. As snowflakes fall from eyelashes, I bawl. A white bunny’s hop halts, little twitching eyes read my poetic plight. Dripping from my index pen, a blizzard of tears - erases all of my faults. Tomorrow, I will start anew, writing my escapades on a pristine white carpet - perhaps many words, perhaps a few. And what might each day bring? A quilting upon white cotton… An epic on framed canvas… My emoticons might vary, but dutifully I sing!
12/12/2016 Nayda’s Quote Response Contest

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Date: 2/8/2020 9:37:00 PM
So nicely written, Kim. Dew drops are very dear to my heart. My granddaughter's name is 'NEHARIKA'; it is a Sanskrit word meaning dew drops. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2020 10:50:00 PM
Thanks for that share..so sweet!
Date: 8/26/2017 9:09:00 PM
The allegorical images here communicate a touching message with effective force and appeal. Well done Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Geoffrey!
Date: 8/7/2017 10:41:00 AM
This is a great piece. It speaks a lot . Keep up the good works. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Derek!
Date: 1/5/2017 11:51:00 AM
Superb verses exhibiting great creativity,tenderness and poetic spirit!A7 Adding to my fav list.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Robert!
Date: 12/25/2016 9:31:00 PM
Such wonderful use of metaphors. A fabulous poem, Kim. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Afzal! :)
Date: 12/24/2016 11:14:00 PM
I can literally see you drop on your knees and magically let rabbits jump from your hat on paper... Congratulations :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Darren! :)
Date: 12/24/2016 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2016 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Nayda! I enjoyed your contest! :)
Date: 12/13/2016 11:27:00 AM
Wow, that is quite a wonderful response to Nyda's quote contest. A 7 & a fav.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 4:07:00 PM
I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 12/12/2016 12:27:00 PM
This was fantastic Dawn. I love how you did this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thanks, Chris! Funny how us poets like to write about "writing" Kim :)

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